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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2001-03-17 01:58 PM


I placed them in a vase last night as stick-like ugly things.
This morning they are glorious as though they've sprouted wings.
So many things we could dismiss as having little worth,
In just one shining moment shows a promise and re-birth.
A poem on this forum, may be moivng swiftly down,
'Til one dear reader gives it life and another go-around.

Thank you, Joyce

© Copyright 2001 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-03-17 02:02 PM


Joyce~
What a little daffodilly delight !

Poetic plunge
we will expunge
With a lift to the sky
on a heartfelt reply !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2001-03-17 02:29 PM


True words and well said. Lovely!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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3 posted 2001-03-17 02:45 PM


I loved the symbolism here Joyce. Very nice!

Betty Lou Hebert

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