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Lack of Oxygen!
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Lack of Oxygen! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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He suffers in unfair predicament of a certain love lost belaboured beleaguered knowledge ungathered affections unclaimed emotions unfelt flawed flailing falling drop by drop the love-struck Romeo bleeds. His heart beats silently in an agonisingly depressed deathbed laying shattered in infinite pieces as the dream of a better life with a beloved one escapes leaving a scar of a stab in the back in a sudden reversal of fortune unceremoniously discarded like a snake's peeling skin unwanted undesired in the holocaust of his life. He is pushed catapulted away to darkness with a ray of light showing the way out as he reads neon signs that lit only for him close the door behind your back and he disappears into the darkness of the outside world down in a hole. While somewhere else, a candle breathes its last and the wise and old claim it to be lack of oxygen. If only they knew! ... Hey friends from the passions' world... I hope that this one signals my return back into the group of friends I have always desired to be with. Forgive my absence. Work, personal and health problems kept me away. Cheers, Regards, Sudhir. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Sudhir...I am suffering from a lack of oxygen myself right now...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Very nice to see you back in this circle of friends. I hope you are well and happy. Now ... breathe deeply !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sudhir, welcome back, so good to see you and look forward to more offerings, you are a verty special man. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The prodigal son returns....welcome home Sudhir...so good to see you, and your writing, again! Are you enjoying the comfortable surroundings of the new layout? Fun, isn't it?! Now....share more poetry with us....it's been a long, long time! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I was getting very worried about you... Welcome home! And what a great way to return...there's an old song, and yes, I forget who sings it (somebody help me out here) "Love is Like Oxygen"---this reminded me of that---HUGS you....glad you're back! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir--So glad to see you and your wonderful poetry, back!! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well you must be coming back into a group of fellow sufferers  nice writing |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is powerful and sad and gripping and it's so great to have you back! *S* Well done! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir beloved one, The pages here were blue without you.(I think it was a lack of oxygen) Now that you're back I can breathe again, your poem was a breath of fresh air although I must admit I holding mine until the end. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
welcome back my friend. . . . . . we kept your spot open while you were gone. . . and you have returned with a wonderful poem. . . as always. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You have a wonderful way with words, reminds me a bit of a friend of mine from Mumbai. They must grow good poets there! I'm glad you came back, though sorry about the bad times. To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hello my sweet poet of Brillance... I too hope this can be the begining of seeing your name here on a regular basis... Powerful aching purge here Sud... my goodness feel better dear one... and remember were saving your spot  We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Welcome back Sudhir! I have missed your words. ---------------------- While somewhere else, a candle breathes its last and the wise and old claim it to be lack of oxygen. If only they knew! ----------------------- Wow! Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is Great Sudi! Welcome back to our family Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
It feels great to belong... Thank you, my friends... James, thank you for coming by... I hope your sufferings are over soon... Take care. Marge, I am trying to breathe as deep as possible... and maybe that is working... Thank you... Kathleen, Thanks a lot for your words of encouragement... Karilea, "prodigal son" ... now, that is a mighty compliment... thank you so much O Serene One, Thanks for the welcome... hugs back to you... Martie, so glad to hear from you as always... thanks... jellybeans, thank you for your words... Kethry, Thank you so very much.... O Sir Sven, thanks for your welcome... kcs~, thanks so much... Janet, my friend, I think I am going to stick around here as much as I can... just was to wish away my sadness... Dee, and I have missed yours too... thanks for the wow... Maree, I think I have been a bad boy for long... and hope to be around in close quarters... thanks regards to all, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 03-19-2001).] |
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