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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2001-01-24 08:39 AM

Thinking Of You!

I watch young fluffy clouds fly rolling by,
Coasting along their paths in the wide sky,
Like white caps floating in a sea of blue
As my face wears smiles just thinking of you.

Sweet memories of tender moments shared,
Caress me like soft breeze that fills the air,
Feeling love like this, my happy heart sighs,
While fast eager clouds carelessly float by.

And I remain watching, thinking of you!
~°~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-01-24 09:22 AM

Sudhir,
shorter than usual, but utterly wonderful!
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-01-24 10:51 AM

lovely images and thoughts

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-01-24 12:33 PM

Sudhir, I did like this writing. Very nicely written.

BC

Frankie
Member

since 2001-01-10

Posts 57

4 posted 2001-01-24 01:58 PM

Sudhir - Great writing - memories like this are the greatest.

Frankie

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-01-24 02:02 PM

Sudhir--Lovely affections in this and imagery too. Nicely penned.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2001-01-25 04:55 PM

Beautiful poem... you've shared a moment of happiness! *S*

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2001-01-25 05:08 PM

So nice to see "Da Man" bringing smiles and inspiration our way again. Wonderful write my friend and so nice to see you resting in the fields of love these days.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2001-03-19 07:43 AM

This reply has taken way more than normal time... but not thanking my friends is bad manners...

Thanks to each one of you for the wonderful appreciative words tht you seem to keep reserved for me...

Regards,
Sudhir

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