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The Love that Grows
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The Love that Grows |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
The majestic beauty of the sunset, soft pastels bringing moods of tranquility. You and I together as one, your arms surround me, with eyes full of pure love. The remembering of the afternoon, as we lay in each other’s arms, together in the spirit of shared love. My husband, my friend, my confidant, you give me peace and joy. Sweet fate brought us here, to go through life, experiencing peak and valleys together. In childhood life was sad, you wiped away the walls I built, teaching me to accept and give love. With patience you let me learn, and fall and make mistakes, then were there to pick me up. My moods complicated, yet you accepted, never giving up on me. So, now we smile at each other, and will one day sit together rocking at an old age together, less one of pass through life before hand, but regardless our love is continuous. This I write to you my love, to say always I am yours. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
your love shines through in this beautiful poem......  SEA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
With patience you let me learn, and fall and make mistakes, then were there to pick me up. My moods complicated, yet you accepted, never giving up on me. So, now we smile at each other, and will one day sit together rocking at an old age together, less one of pass through life before hand, but regardless our love is continuous. This I write to you my love, to say always I am yours. Oh this is beautiful! warmed my heart Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-15-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet words...James |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
I thank y'all for the comments. Red |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The feeling transcended here, red--just perfect! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Red, My friend, you just keep getting better and better at this. This was a simply beautiful endearing piece and I loved it! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Red, This poem speaks my thoughts, its really strange how close they are to my own, you were able to put them so wonderfully I am happy that you have such a beautiful relationship with your mate, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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