Open Poetry #12 |
On The Wings Of Imagination |
Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Falling into a pool of dreams nothing is what it seems.... Flying upon the perfumed breeze caught up in a net of autumn leaves Looking down on the world so small leaving feeling like a giant tall Then to float softly to the ground Surronded by flowers all around Then upon a bed of soft petals The flowers containg no neddles Swimming in the suns light feeling as high as a small child's kite running over an endless plain nothing to lose everything to gain While basking in a light showering rain i felt my heart being rinsed of all pain roused by the coo of an hopeful dove under a rainbow of never ending love Now tell me do you believe that imagination is the key? ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"While basking in a light showering rain i felt my heart being rinsed of all pain" great lines.... and yes, it is the key |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
I really liked it WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
No arguments from me on that point. Well done. AT " I can lie to my mirror only so long as it chooses to listen to me, and look me in the eye." |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Voiceless, Yes I do and I travel on my imagination on a daily basis, I love this, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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