Open Poetry #12 |
The breeze |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
The breeze (sometimes we all lack direction) See yourself through my eyes, the mirror of your dreams, all your mixed emotions are seldom what they seem, Take pleasure in your endings, begin to live again, for a moment can change all things, nothing stays the same, Grow for new tommorrows live for your todays be the self you feel you are, confusions just a phase, Dont consider your direction let fate lift up your heart, the breeze that blows you gently on could turn, and tear apart all that you have built upon, all that you believe, all those plans you bank upon, all those thoughts concieved, Build your hearts foundations on granite not on sand, take the strength I freely give, I'm holding out my hand, I ask nothing from you but believe you need to give, not to me, but to yourself, so be yourself and live, Are you an enigma, a leaf blown in lifes storm, float down gently in my hands, I'll keep you safe and warm, then when the storm is over when the time is right, a gentle breeze will pick you up and float you from my sight, but we will be much stronger, for we have shared a storm, and maybe in our futures a breeze might blow you home. Olias. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Olias....I like your breezes....I like this song....I just like, overall, the way you wove your words.... thank you.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Are you an enigma, a leaf blown in lifes storm, float down gently in my hands, I'll keep you safe and warm, then when the storm is over when the time is right, a gentle breeze will pick you up and float you from my sight, but we will be much stronger, for we have shared a storm, and maybe in our futures a breeze might blow you home. ============================= this was a breath of fresh air and poetic breeze of rhyme ... very cool write Olias ... i enjoyed this empowering inspire much poet sir jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This was exactly what I needed today. And though I may not apply it yet, thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think the breeze needs to lift this back up for a little while longer.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll have to agree with JLR... your words meant so much to me, I felt you must be talking to me. *S* Who's to know just who we'll touch When we pick up our pen... A heart might loosen shackles Be blown gently home again. Well done... and thanks. *S* |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Your words over took my heart, a very beautiful poem you have written. Kerri |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Sunshine, I am honoured by your words, may all your songs be sweet and life be a breeze. J.M. Thank you poet for your kind comments, sometimes we all need people just to believe in us. JLR. I'm very happy I could give you a little boost, your words are very kind thank you for replying. Suthern. Thank you I'm overwhelmed by your reply and your lovely words. Kerri S. Your very kind my pen and I are very happy we could touch your heart, be well. Regards and thank you to you all, Olias. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Very tender, encouraging and protective. This is simple and uplifting ~ thanks for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I need a breeze like this...thanks Olias for the thoughts...great write...and it would make a wonderful song |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Meadowmuse, Thank you for your kind words I'm glad you enjoyed. Paula, I'm very happy you commented, thank you very much. Regards to you both, Olias. |
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