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Sven
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0 posted 2001-03-14 08:54 PM


for my friend, doreen peri

weep not lonely heart
for you are not alone here
we will dry your tears

with our open arms
we will take your heart inside
and dispel the fear

come now lonely heart
accept now our gift of love
and be healed again

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-03-14 08:59 PM


I second this..for Doreen, and also for you, this is wonderful.
Sandra

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2 posted 2001-03-14 09:12 PM


WONDERFUL
As always Sven you have proved what a true friend you are.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-03-14 09:16 PM


she will appreciate...much...

Temptress
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4 posted 2001-03-14 09:16 PM


Sven,
As usual, you are your sweet self, Sir.
Beautiful here..

Temptress
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5 posted 2001-03-14 09:45 PM


.....
Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2001-03-14 10:14 PM


How lucky she, to have such a friend. Joyce
ethome
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7 posted 2001-03-15 05:58 AM


Great write Sven...friendship brings out those kinds of feelings....and you have done a superb job for such a good friend........................................................................


come now lonely heart
accept now our gift of love
and be healed again

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

doreen peri
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8 posted 2001-03-15 06:59 AM


thank you so very much, sven.... this is lovely and i appreciate your friendship and caring...

it's a new day today.... it's got to make more sense

thank you again! a very kind and caring gesture with beautiful wording...

Martha Cowan
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9 posted 2001-03-15 07:23 AM


This was very beautiful...expressed tenderly and eloquently. What a wonderful gesture of friendship.
Smiles to you, Martha



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10 posted 2001-03-15 08:41 AM


A good friend, a good poem...nice way to start the day.
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11 posted 2001-03-15 12:22 PM


Sven, your talent as a writer touches us all and your gift of friendship certainly warms our hearts...
A beautiful gesture and a heartfelt write for our PoetFriend Doreen...
~coco~

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12 posted 2001-03-15 12:33 PM



A beautiful write from your heart to hers, Sir Sven, you are such a true friend!

Take care,
Melissa~


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

~Melissa P. Monette~



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13 posted 2001-03-15 12:42 PM


Fine words sir, much admiration,

Regards,
Olias.

Sven
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14 posted 2001-03-15 01:37 PM


thanks to everyone that's replied. . . I'm glad that it could help some of you as well. . . and that you enjoyed it. . .

doreen, yes, it's a new day. . .and with each new day, there are new things to learn, new friends to make and new loves to hold. . . things that make a lonely heart less lonely. . .

you know that we're all here for you. . .anytime. . . take care my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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