Open Poetry #12 |
Stream of Life......Tanka |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Stream of life Vivid reflections enchanting inspiration gentle stream of life within nature's minerals treasured by refreshing touch. Charisma 12/03/01 ~tmp~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely piece, Charisma. The photo looks as if it could have been taken in the hills of Eastern or Central Oregon. WEll done! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautiful.......makes me want to stick my toes in SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Most lovely and soothing. You just get better and better with these! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Charisma, This is such a beautiful combination, just lovely, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful picture, Charisma and terrific poem! Nathan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Vas: thank you for your kind words, and to tell you the truth, I don't know where the pic is taken, so it could be eastern or Central Oregon. found the pic on the web and well this Tanka was born. Sea: yeah I can imagine that, thank you for your always kind reply. Melissa: well thank you for your kind comment, and I do hope that I still grow in this wonderful form. Cerenity: thank you for the lovely, glad that you liked both. Nate: thank you my friend, glad that you liked it. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful picture and poem!! You write these so well!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ My friend, my friend ... so very nice to see your smile here beside my stream of life ... Beautiful words to compliment a likewise lovely verse. Be well, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reflections of your soul.... a wonderful read... |
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