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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-03-12 08:54 AM




Stream of life

Vivid reflections
enchanting inspiration
gentle stream of life
within nature's minerals
treasured by refreshing touch.

Charisma

12/03/01
~tmp~


© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
VAS
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1 posted 2001-03-12 09:12 AM


Lovely piece, Charisma. The photo looks as if it could have been taken in the hills of Eastern or Central Oregon.

WEll done!

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2 posted 2001-03-12 09:35 AM


Beautiful.......makes me want to stick my toes in SEA
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3 posted 2001-03-12 12:38 PM



Most lovely and soothing. You just get better and better with these!

Take care,
Melissa~

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4 posted 2001-03-13 10:32 AM


Hi Charisma,


This is such a beautiful combination, just lovely,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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5 posted 2001-03-13 10:44 AM


Beautiful picture, Charisma and terrific poem!

Nathan

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Vas: thank you for your kind words, and to tell you the truth, I don't know where the pic is taken, so it could be eastern or Central Oregon. found the pic on the web and well this Tanka was born.

Sea: yeah I can imagine that, thank you for your always kind reply.


Melissa: well thank you for your kind comment, and I do hope that I still grow in this wonderful form.


Cerenity: thank you for the lovely, glad that you liked both.


Nate: thank you my friend, glad that you liked it.

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7 posted 2001-03-14 11:24 PM


Wonderful picture and poem!! You write these so well!!

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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8 posted 2001-03-15 07:29 AM


Charisma~
My friend, my friend ...
so very nice to see your smile here beside
my stream of life ...

Beautiful words to compliment a likewise lovely verse.
Be well, sweet poet.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-03-15 01:55 PM


Reflections of your soul....

a wonderful read...

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