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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-03-14 08:51 PM


Unfolding
By: Noah Eaton
3/11/01

Angelic siren’s waves come kissing
My hearts love beach
Waiting for you to lay your desires anchor
And hold you in my arms as you’ve been too long at sea

Seducing me in your beauty as romantic words escape your lips
Spilling a tsunami of comfort into my body
Shoulders shrugging as I sigh in your overwhelming beauty
Fainting into your arms, falling into a reality dream

Kissing your velvet ruby lips
Mesmerized by the rocking pocketwatch of loves eternity
Closing my eyes, breathing the warmth of your mouth
Holding you down on the soft sands, feeling happy knowing we are one, honestly

Sinking into your hearts paradise
Listening to your heart beat against mine, singing in canon
Opening the window of my heart, melting in passions wind
Holding you close, our souls finally met

Holding you in your arms, as you hold me around my neck
Dancing with you under the rose moon
Putting my jacket around you to keep you safe and warm
As you kiss me on my cheeks and forehead, warming spirits hearth true

My heart is in you
As yours is in mine, darling
Giving you sweet, romantic love you desire
Loving you for all eternity, as my heart's happily unfolding


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1 posted 2001-03-15 12:45 PM


Hi Miss Angel,

"Oh" the feeling of love and your poetry sings of it so lovely very much enjoyed,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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2 posted 2001-03-16 09:04 AM


I like the romance of this... well done! *S*
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3 posted 2001-03-16 09:28 AM


Noah~
Gentle romanticism at play here.
Nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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