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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-03-14 07:16 PM


Comfort Zoning

I know someone;
you do, as well
needing comfort,
a breathing spell

give it your all
give it quite well,
folks are worth it,
with tales to tell

comfort zoning
a place to talk,
forests, sidewalks,
places to walk

sunsets, sunrises,
mornings, and nights
give, completely,
feel with great might

comfort zoning
where you should be
living, breathing
so tranquilly

days come, days go
ins, outs, just so
mild days, then wild
seek peace in style

this child of you
where sun's rain gains
begin again
where life loves you

comfort zoning
childish desires
comfort speaking
lights all my fires

just simple thoughts
to share with you
giving insight
leaving you clues


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Martie
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1 posted 2001-03-14 07:22 PM


Lady...It seems as if you are speaking this one to me...beautifully written!
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2 posted 2001-03-14 08:16 PM


where you should be
living, breathing
so tranquilly

days come, days go
ins, outs, just so
mild days, then wild
seek peace in style

this child of you
where sun's rain gains
begin again
where life loves you
===========================

ah...sounds wonderful ...
where does one find such peace...
(besides in poetry)
so lovely and serene Lady...
well done

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

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3 posted 2001-03-15 12:31 PM


Hi Lady in White,

This was wonderful, enjoyed very much,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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4 posted 2001-03-15 01:59 AM


I am in the comfort zone now..


Bernie..



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5 posted 2001-03-15 09:32 AM


Thank you all for joining me....
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6 posted 2001-03-15 11:48 AM


Hi,
Enjoyed this poem very much.
Red

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7 posted 2001-03-15 03:10 PM


I like this one a lot, Lady!

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 03-15-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-03-15 05:55 PM


opps reading this a again, just put me in the comfort zone....



Bernie


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9 posted 2001-03-18 04:33 PM


you are all so nice...thank you...and to you Bernie....come join the comfort zone...anytime....
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10 posted 2007-02-04 03:04 AM


we all need friends like you've described...beautiful words.

~~~kingsangel~~~

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