Open Poetry #12 |
Comfort Zoning |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Comfort Zoning I know someone; you do, as well needing comfort, a breathing spell give it your all give it quite well, folks are worth it, with tales to tell comfort zoning a place to talk, forests, sidewalks, places to walk sunsets, sunrises, mornings, and nights give, completely, feel with great might comfort zoning where you should be living, breathing so tranquilly days come, days go ins, outs, just so mild days, then wild seek peace in style this child of you where sun's rain gains begin again where life loves you comfort zoning childish desires comfort speaking lights all my fires just simple thoughts to share with you giving insight leaving you clues |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...It seems as if you are speaking this one to me...beautifully written! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
where you should be living, breathing so tranquilly days come, days go ins, outs, just so mild days, then wild seek peace in style this child of you where sun's rain gains begin again where life loves you =========================== ah...sounds wonderful ... where does one find such peace... (besides in poetry) so lovely and serene Lady... well done Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lady in White, This was wonderful, enjoyed very much, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I am in the comfort zone now.. Bernie.. Bernie Slicker |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you all for joining me.... |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Hi, Enjoyed this poem very much. Red |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this one a lot, Lady! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 03-15-2001).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
opps reading this a again, just put me in the comfort zone.... Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
you are all so nice...thank you...and to you Bernie....come join the comfort zone...anytime.... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
we all need friends like you've described...beautiful words. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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