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Precious Love
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Precious Love |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
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Precious Love Into your eyes, I start my journey To discover carefully How golden circles enfold your iris Shows a lovely golden bliss While I drown inside your eyes Merge within heavenly sighs As I peel levels of your soul To bare your delighted whole How your magic enfold me tight Within your eyes I'm losing height Tender feelings floating above Entwine our souls with precious love. Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, my friend, this is a precious one, full of warm feelings........I love it!! I'm on the lookout for your name always here!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful! I love these lines: "While I drown inside your eyes merge within heavenly sighs as I peel levels of your soul" Wow! Take care, Melissa |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
charisma~ some powerful stuff you got here girlie! excellent writing as always from you. full of heart, full of soul. take care amy : "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely charisma..HUGS..enjoyed... ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed the read my friend, as usual. jwesley |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Loved it. " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very sweet CHARISMA!! dreamily romantic... hugs, g "i know its kinda late i hope i didnt wake you but theres somethin i just gotta say-- i knew you'd understand..." jcroce |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
How your magic enfold me tight Within your eyes I'm losing height This lovely, Charisma. I love these lines, love to think of getting lost in the depths. Very nice writing. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Vandana: thank you my friend, glad that you like it Sunnyone: great to know that you love it, and I am honoured to know that you are looking out for me.....as I know how a great poet you are....I enjoy your words of art very much too. Melissa: I am happy to know that you loved these lines...thank you for the *wow* aimy: well thank you for your lovely compliment and for the excellent, appreciate it very much as I know what a talented writer you are. Victoria: thank you for the *hugs*.....always love those friendly hugs....and I'm so glad that you enjoyed the read. jwesley: thank you my friend, I'm glad that you enjoyed it EagleOne: thank you for reading and I am glad that you love it. dg: well I am a dreamy romanticus.....maybe to much a dreamer, but well its nice to be a dreamer as life can be so cruel sometimes. kcsgrandma: oh yeah.....to lost your self in depth of eyes.....is a marvelous feeling..thank you for your lovely comment. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Such lovely writing, as I've come to admire from you. What a welcome you are to these forums. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you Marge, for your kind reply....and I am very honoured that you like my humble writings, as I know thay you are one of the greatest poets inhere, so my dear friend, I am the one from admire you.... Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Charisma, the expression in this is so vivid....I loved the wordplay! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great piece, Charisma...I especially loved these lines: as I peel levels of your soul, to bare your delighted whole. Exquisite poetry here. Nathan |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
A very exquistie and lovely poem, Charism. I always know it will be delightful, before I even read.... I watch for your poems as much as i can aloha, my friendPassion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kathleen: thank you, glad that you loved the wordplay.... Nate dog: thank you for your kind comment KoKo: thank you, and I appreciate your comments very ver much....and I am honoured that you like my simple writes..... thank you my friend |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always find precious love through loves eyes and feel warmth in your heart always! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just because I'm missing you and hoping to stir that English-writing muse of yours~  LOVE YOU my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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