Open Poetry #12 |
Together Forever |
maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Together Forever By Richard Maxfield 1-15-2001 Rose peddles falling Like drops From the sky Moves me to passion Trough loves Watchful eye Birds singing Their tender Sweet song My heart Has been waiting For you so long Light shines bright So brilliant So true A dream A prayer Embodied in you More than destiny One love Or chance Kiss your lips Pull close Romance This my life For you I give Together forever In love We live [This message has been edited by maxtec1 (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey, what is this doing on page 2 with no replies??? This is beautiful!! The one on the receiving end of this poetry is one lucky lady, Richard!! I enjoyed this!! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you SP for your very nice comment. Love and light, Richard |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
Richard, THIS IS GREAT! I can't believe it. What a precious picture of what love is. Whoever she is, she's a lucky gal. Beautifully done! Pixydust |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Well done, Max, I feel like I could sing to this! Nathan |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
as always richard i love your words |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you my friends for your comments. Love and light, Richard |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Richard~ very sweet sentiments here, enjoyed -SEA |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aww Rich.... You KNOW just how to bring that smile, don't ya? Loved this, as usual..As you know, I always do... Hugs ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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