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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-14 09:37 AM

and if I failed to give to you
in silence, words of speak,
the dawning's kiss to touch your lips,
caress of finger's, cheek

would you then haunt my thoughts, desires
in lapse of knowing bliss
or press me to your wanting needs
to wonder what's amiss?

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-03-14 09:52 AM

I'm sure they would...

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2001-03-14 09:53 AM

ditto from Elizabeth,

I hope so also,

Bernie

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-03-14 10:02 AM

would you then haunt my thoughts, desires
in lapse of knowing bliss
or press me to your wanting needs
to wonder what's amiss?

Yes I would!

Great work Wynter!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-03-14 10:06 AM

Elizabeth, Bernie...thank you both..I am not so sure but...

E..I wanted to create a longer piece but it just wouldn't go anywhere today...*s

~Wynter

sometimes you must settle for less

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-14-2001).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-03-14 08:35 PM

Short, Sweet, and passionate.
I enjoyed every letter.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-03-14 10:59 PM

If they're smart they would!! Well said!!

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-03-16 09:47 AM

Temptress
thankyou I am glad you stopped to read and respond *s

Lone Wolf
I am sure he does... thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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