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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-11 07:29 AM

Worlds Beyond the Real

Remembering that first glance,
eyes hidden behind a moment's curtain,
wondering, dipping into thoughts
of a voiceless child, wanting
to welcome this breath of freshness
to impact my heart.

Was it need, to set a heart free,
from the ignorance of loving?
Would time mark the distance of aloneness
and inspire an understanding
and bond me to yours?
Would my extended hand of truths
unfold a tale of a life fading,
out of control, wishing for the ugly side
to half turn and show it's beauty
that masks the pain from within?

I allowed his footprints to return,
over and over, trampling the good,
leaving me with only whispers
of the attainable and a silent soul
given a sentence of search,
a solitude of ache, to blur the visions
seen through hazel eyes.

In the fullness of this night,
moon in sweet array, would I not wish
to call upon you in dreams,
to put reality to sleep, and
in that moments embrace,
would doubt take a dip and cleanse itself,
so that pain would be my rescue no more
and allow me a departure on a journey,
pure of heart, to sail in spirit in find,
of a passion unblemished, where time
and distance shall become one,
and a moment of aloneness,
shall turn to bliss.

I separate myself from the now
and a tranquilness settles in.
As the moon's fade becomes dawn's gain,
I awaken in dreams, your eyes silently
reflecting mine, no longer a vision of pain,
no illusions of truth, no explanations needed.
In a harmony of imagined, beyond the real,
I am left a residue, a reigning happiness,
knowing that tomorrow shall return
to myst my morn.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-11 08:09 AM

Time to get a new, stiff broom with a good, firm handle that is free of splinters, and start brushing away those footsteps....

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

2 posted 2001-03-11 08:22 AM

Quiet gentle depth that flows wonderfully. That isn't easy to do and I compliment you for it. Truly beautiful writing.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-03-15 05:58 PM

Oh wynter...this is a ponderous musing and lovely--deserves another go round, methinks!

Enjoyed this one very much!

DreamLess
Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 92

4 posted 2001-03-15 06:35 PM

what can I say ... I am out of words,
no ,no ... words can't even say what i want to tell you about how much i liked your words , they can't even discribe even little of what I want to say how much deep your words are, so I am not going to say any thing more cause I gave up .

WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-03-16 09:42 AM

Sunshine
those footsteps will be there awhile..strange isn't it how one loses control of their life more than once in the same situation? huggzz
and thanks Karilea

Just A Woman
thank you very much *s

Serenity
thank you for the second go round and for enjoying it..I really felt this the other day...~Sighing~

Dreamless
I love how you respond to my words ...~Smiling~
thank you

~Wynter Bliss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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