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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-03-14 08:11 AM



When Blue Moon Turned To Gold

~*Marge Tindal*~

How she cried,
this Blue Moon of starless nights
across an indigo canvas she phased
waxing - waning
ever-remaining
cresting with cratered sorrow

And when she shuddered
slender slivers of teardrops
fell off across the night
in crystal prisms of light
sparkling evermore
to illuminate the way
and then she came full
spilling her glow amid
the teardrops of her adornment

Such a marriage of beauty and light
fixated above the firmament
And it was good



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
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1 posted 2001-03-14 09:14 AM


Marge you're on your regular wonderful role of creating beauty!

And when she shuddered
slender slivers of teardrops
fell off across the night
in crystal prisms of light
sparkling evermore
to illuminate the way
and then she came full
spilling her glow amid
the teardrops of her adornment

Now that's pretty!! Good stuff poet lady!

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2001-03-14 09:30 AM


Marge, your writings always fill me with a sense of joy at being alive......and the pictures that you share in them are so very special. This one is wonderful, and I truly enjoyed reading it, my friend!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




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3 posted 2001-03-14 09:42 AM


Marge, a crystalline piece if ever you wrote one....

a keeper...

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-03-14 09:54 AM


And when she shuddered
slender slivers of teardrops
fell off across the night
in crystal prisms of light
sparkling evermore
to illuminate the way
and then she came full
spilling her glow amid
the teardrops of her adornment

Such a marriage of beauty and light
fixated above the firmament
And it was good

===============

OH YES....ITS VERY VERY GOOD.
So very lovely Margie
wonderful imagery.....

"And when she shuddered
slender slivers of teardrops
fell off across the night
in crystal prisms of light"


thats so cool....so poetically pretty
and the message of the poem has its own light as well....
another keeper from Margie-girls moon inspired pen

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Honeybee
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5 posted 2001-03-14 10:49 AM



Clever and beautiful!~ You uplift me with your poetry

Take care Margie-girl,
Melissa~

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6 posted 2001-03-14 10:53 AM


I loved it... the entire thing.
The last line was a neat effect. Made me chuckle to myself.
The graphic effects were also neat.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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7 posted 2001-03-14 01:03 PM


Yer playin' my song with this blue moon tune--(you're kinda witchy sometimes, yanno that? ) AND I LOVE IT!!!!
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8 posted 2001-03-14 06:26 PM


As always, an outstanding piece of writing!
Really beautiful.

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2001-03-14 06:31 PM


i just downloaded "blue moon" by mel torme from napster... it's a gem... as is your verse here..... this one shines!.. through the night
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-03-14 06:59 PM


ETHome~
How very much I appreciate your comments.
Thank you.

SunnyOne~
You have given me great reason to smile.
Thank you so much.

Karilea~
Hugging a new muse - and love sharing her thoughts.
Thanks bunches.

JanetMarie~
I could just hug your neck for picking out
what is also my favorite part of this piece.
{{{HUG}}}... there !
Thank you muchly.

Melissa~
Ahhh ! To uplift you is to catch me in your draft ...
My spirits are also on the soar.
Thank you.

Allan~
To leave a chuckle where my thoughts have been-
is like finding the light on when one returns home !
Thank you.

Serenity~
Yeah ... I know !
But I do have to work at it !

Trillium~
Thank you, Betty Lou.
I am really pleased to have this piece enjoyed so sincerely.

Doreen~
PERFECT !
I just listened to it also -
Good companion piece of music.
Thanks for your reply, sweet lady.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-03-15 02:24 PM


Very good indeed! *S* What lovely images you've given us, Marge... Beautiful!
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12 posted 2001-03-15 05:48 PM


Well all has been said except poetic imagery does not get better than this!
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13 posted 2001-03-15 06:09 PM


And it was good. And this is good, thanks for sharing!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2001-03-15 06:50 PM


SuthernGal~
Sending *hugs* and sincerest thanks.

Mysteria~
Awwww ! Thank you so very much.
I'm really glad to know you enjoyed it.
I enjoyed writing it.

Walker~
I am so very appreciative of your reply.
Thanks so much.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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