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When Blue Moon Turned To Gold
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When Blue Moon Turned To Gold |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 When Blue Moon Turned To Gold~*Marge Tindal*~ How she cried, this Blue Moon of starless nights across an indigo canvas she phased waxing - waning ever-remaining cresting with cratered sorrow And when she shuddered slender slivers of teardrops fell off across the night in crystal prisms of light sparkling evermore to illuminate the way and then she came full spilling her glow amid the teardrops of her adornment Such a marriage of beauty and light fixated above the firmament And it was good~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge you're on your regular wonderful role of creating beauty! And when she shuddered slender slivers of teardrops fell off across the night in crystal prisms of light sparkling evermore to illuminate the way and then she came full spilling her glow amid the teardrops of her adornment Now that's pretty!! Good stuff poet lady! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge, your writings always fill me with a sense of joy at being alive......and the pictures that you share in them are so very special. This one is wonderful, and I truly enjoyed reading it, my friend!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, a crystalline piece if ever you wrote one.... a keeper... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And when she shuddered slender slivers of teardrops fell off across the night in crystal prisms of light sparkling evermore to illuminate the way and then she came full spilling her glow amid the teardrops of her adornment Such a marriage of beauty and light fixated above the firmament And it was good =============== OH YES....ITS VERY VERY GOOD.  So very lovely Margie wonderful imagery..... "And when she shuddered slender slivers of teardrops fell off across the night in crystal prisms of light" thats so cool....so poetically pretty and the message of the poem has its own light as well.... another keeper from Margie-girls moon inspired pen  Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Clever and beautiful!~ You uplift me with your poetry Take care Margie-girl, Melissa~ |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I loved it... the entire thing. The last line was a neat effect. Made me chuckle to myself. The graphic effects were also neat.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yer playin' my song with this blue moon tune--(you're kinda witchy sometimes, yanno that? ) AND I LOVE IT!!!! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
As always, an outstanding piece of writing! Really beautiful. Betty Lou Hebert |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i just downloaded "blue moon" by mel torme from napster... it's a gem... as is your verse here..... this one shines!.. through the night |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ How very much I appreciate your comments. Thank you. SunnyOne~ You have given me great reason to smile. Thank you so much. Karilea~ Hugging a new muse - and love sharing her thoughts. Thanks bunches. JanetMarie~ I could just hug your neck for picking out what is also my favorite part of this piece. {{{HUG}}}... there ! Thank you muchly. Melissa~ Ahhh ! To uplift you is to catch me in your draft ... My spirits are also on the soar. Thank you. Allan~ To leave a chuckle where my thoughts have been- is like finding the light on when one returns home ! Thank you. Serenity~ Yeah ... I know ! But I do have to work at it ! Trillium~ Thank you, Betty Lou. I am really pleased to have this piece enjoyed so sincerely. Doreen~ PERFECT ! I just listened to it also - Good companion piece of music. Thanks for your reply, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very good indeed! *S* What lovely images you've given us, Marge... Beautiful! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well all has been said except poetic imagery does not get better than this! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
And it was good. And this is good, thanks for sharing! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Sending *hugs* and sincerest thanks. Mysteria~ Awwww ! Thank you so very much. I'm really glad to know you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it. Walker~ I am so very appreciative of your reply. Thanks so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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