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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-02-03 11:17 PM


Love
Whispered
Still brings chills
On a night
When windows
Are raised
In hopes
Of reprieves
A pardon
From the pain
Of without

Love
Proclaimed
On the top
of your lungs
Is a mountain
Of hope
Crumbling down
And raised
Are the windows
Where I may
In answer
Send you
A cool
Winters breeze

Love
Not a cliché
Not a tossed
About bird
On the winds
Of a passionless
Song

Love
A torrent
Of churning
A fire that’s
Burning
And the only
Reprieve
Is the wind
And it’s ways
Spread your flames
Around mine
Let the shutters
Fly open
Let love be a bullet
A sniper’s
Red arrow

Love
A parade
A ticker tape
Faire
From high
On the roof top
Both of us
There
I love you
I love you
Let me
Make you
Aware

Love
Do not hesitate
Do not wish to wait
Do not be alarmed
When you’re in my arms

Love
Shout
Love!

And you will be heard
Even when whispered
That word

Love
Love
Love…




You know the "Never Ending Story"?
They're still telling it!



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-03-2001).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-02-03 11:47 PM


Walt~ I'm printing this............... -SEA
Paula Finn
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missouri
2 posted 2001-02-04 12:34 PM


This is AWESOME such thoughts you evoke with this Walt
dgvarner
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3 posted 2001-02-04 12:54 PM


walt...as my kid would say, "oh my goosey!!"   cause this is wonderful...very awesome ..very much enjoy reading this side of your poet..  love it!!



"i know its kinda late
i hope i didnt wake you
but theres somethin i just gotta say--
i knew you'd understand..."
jcroce

CocoBaci
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4 posted 2001-02-04 02:16 AM


Walt, ya penned another sweet poem my friend...
Thank you for the enjoyable read...
Yuh me like this one much...
~coco~


You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-02-04 09:05 AM


Walt~
Greatly enjoyed this.
Love - love - love looks good on you !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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elisaseyes
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fort worth texas
6 posted 2001-02-05 01:48 PM


This is the last poem I am gonna bump for you WayoutHubby. But really upon reading it, I wasn't forced to reply.
Martie
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7 posted 2001-02-05 02:16 PM


BRAVO!!!  Clapping for ya, Walt...yup!
serenity blaze
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8 posted 2001-03-15 06:03 PM


Wow...how did I miss this? Very passionately loving waltie...go to the top of the page, m'friend! This is great!
JLR
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9 posted 2001-03-15 06:08 PM


love
shout
love!

OK!

Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-03-15 06:41 PM


well, I'll just say it, since I'm probably old enough to be your "older sister"
this was downright sexy!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Cerenity
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11 posted 2001-03-15 06:43 PM


Hi Walt,

WOW, WOW again you did a LOVELY job with this one, it was really wonderful i sware,

Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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