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LOVE (for goodness sake)
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LOVE (for goodness sake) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Love Whispered Still brings chills On a night When windows Are raised In hopes Of reprieves A pardon From the pain Of without Love Proclaimed On the top of your lungs Is a mountain Of hope Crumbling down And raised Are the windows Where I may In answer Send you A cool Winters breeze Love Not a cliché Not a tossed About bird On the winds Of a passionless Song Love A torrent Of churning A fire that’s Burning And the only Reprieve Is the wind And it’s ways Spread your flames Around mine Let the shutters Fly open Let love be a bullet A sniper’s Red arrow Love A parade A ticker tape Faire From high On the roof top Both of us There I love you I love you Let me Make you Aware Love Do not hesitate Do not wish to wait Do not be alarmed When you’re in my arms Love Shout Love! And you will be heard Even when whispered That word Love Love Love… You know the "Never Ending Story"? They're still telling it! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ I'm printing this...............  -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is AWESOME such thoughts you evoke with this Walt |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
walt...as my kid would say, "oh my goosey!!"  cause this is wonderful...very awesome ..very much enjoy reading this side of your poet.. love it!!"i know its kinda late i hope i didnt wake you but theres somethin i just gotta say-- i knew you'd understand..." jcroce |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Walt, ya penned another sweet poem my friend... Thank you for the enjoyable read... Yuh me like this one much... ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Greatly enjoyed this. Love - love - love looks good on you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
This is the last poem I am gonna bump for you WayoutHubby. But really upon reading it, I wasn't forced to reply. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
BRAVO!!! Clapping for ya, Walt...yup! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow...how did I miss this? Very passionately loving waltie...go to the top of the page, m'friend! This is great!  |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
love shout love! OK! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, I'll just say it, since I'm probably old enough to be your "older sister" this was downright sexy!!! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Walt, WOW, WOW again you did a LOVELY job with this one, it was really wonderful i sware,  Cerenity"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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