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Scootterman
New Member

since 2001-03-14

Posts 6

0 posted 2001-03-14 12:29 PM

This is a poem that I wrote sometime ago that was posted here about a year ago. Seeing as how new people join every day I will repost it for them. I hope you like it.

I call it "the rose":

I hold a rose up to my chest
It's plain for you to see
You think it's pretty and yes it is
But it has yet to be

The rose has a secret
That I only hold the key
Just ask the right question
And I'll gladly turn the key

The rose has yet to open
As yet my love for thee
Open your heart and let me in
For here I'll always be.

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

1 posted 2001-03-14 12:59 PM

SWEET POEM

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

2 posted 2001-03-14 12:59 PM

SWEET POEM

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2001-03-14 01:10 AM

Hi Scotterman,

This was so sweet very much enjoyed it and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

4 posted 2001-03-14 08:12 AM

"but it has yet to be" - Beautiful. Welcome back.

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-03-14 10:41 AM

As thecraig said, "Sweet poem. Sweet poem."
Couldn't have said it better myself.

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-03-14 10:55 AM

enjoy your read

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

7 posted 2001-03-14 11:33 AM

niceeeee

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-03-14 11:48 AM

Very nice poem indeed! The rose is about to open I think!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

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