Open Poetry #12 |
The Rose |
Scootterman New Member
since 2001-03-14
Posts 6 |
This is a poem that I wrote sometime ago that was posted here about a year ago. Seeing as how new people join every day I will repost it for them. I hope you like it. I call it "the rose": I hold a rose up to my chest It's plain for you to see You think it's pretty and yes it is But it has yet to be The rose has a secret That I only hold the key Just ask the right question And I'll gladly turn the key The rose has yet to open As yet my love for thee Open your heart and let me in For here I'll always be. |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
SWEET POEM |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
SWEET POEM |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Scotterman, This was so sweet very much enjoyed it and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
"but it has yet to be" - Beautiful. Welcome back. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
As thecraig said, "Sweet poem. Sweet poem." Couldn't have said it better myself. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
niceeeee |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice poem indeed! The rose is about to open I think! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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