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SEA
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0 posted 2001-01-31 11:30 PM




He gave me seventeen kisses
I only asked for one……………
He gave me seventeen kisses
And I came completely undone


He  started at 7:17
And worked round the clock till  3
Giving those seventeen kisses
To every inch of me…………………….


Each one was given
With patience and care
I thought I'd die
when he reached shoulders bare


Seventeen kisses
From here……………to there
Seventeen kisses
~ everywhere ~


He gave me seventeen kisses
~ now it's my turn ~
I have seventeen kisses
I need to return………………..

~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-31 11:40 PM


He can always count on you
for a sweet return!
I’ll send you a hug for this one

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2 posted 2001-01-31 11:40 PM


There is a man with some very lucky lips running around somewhere!!!

This is great, SEA! I like your style....

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3 posted 2001-02-01 12:12 PM


Insect~ I'll take that hug and send one right back to ya!  

Balladeer~ thank you sweet sweet man  

-SEA

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4 posted 2001-02-01 12:22 PM


SEA~
*smiling here*
BIG TIME !
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2001-02-01 01:07 AM


This is charming, and made me smile very big.   I think there are TWO lucky people involved there.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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Marge~ like this???..... Thank you  

KCSG~thank you, I think so too  

-SEA

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7 posted 2001-02-02 12:40 PM


Very Nice Sea. Liked very much
Rich

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8 posted 2001-02-02 01:09 AM


I don't know where the # came from - but I surely LOVE this - most emphatically
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9 posted 2001-02-02 01:11 AM


Ohh. Good to see you arent greedy.. in kissing and sharing your wonderful poetry. Thanks for the read.

-Jeremy Raulinaitis

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

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10 posted 2001-02-02 01:23 AM


oh baby... Im digging this lip smaking sweet treat...
what a  way cool poem Sea-gator ...
mmm mmm mmm ...
there goes that muse of yours inspiring magic in your pen again  
very nice me girlie girl

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~


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11 posted 2001-02-02 02:22 AM


Sea...mmmmmm girl...I just like the whole idea of this...now if I could just find someone willing to let me kiss them seventeen times LOL
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12 posted 2001-02-02 07:30 AM


whooohooooo ~Sea~.....what a write my friend, and if I was you, I would start counting over and over......I would lost the count between here and there.....



((hugs))
Charisma

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13 posted 2001-02-02 07:47 AM


SEA,
seventeen kisses wow I can't believe you were counting while he was kissing. I'd have had other things to do with my mind like remembering my name. I think you should have a two for one sale. Then if you are still counting at the end of it...take two asprin and see me in the morning.

Great write! One that is not demeaned at all by my trivia.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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14 posted 2001-02-02 01:15 PM


Sea--I think seventeen must be your lucky number...for you have used it make a treasure.
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15 posted 2001-02-02 02:53 PM


This is terrific!  Get busy!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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16 posted 2001-02-02 04:28 PM


Wow...what a time of year to be sharing kisses...and poetry like this one. Seems cupid has been playing around a bit  

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17 posted 2001-02-02 04:30 PM


~Oh cool! Cuuute! Smile Sea. This was great. *Peace you.
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18 posted 2002-03-30 06:01 PM




(giggles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, he must feel so lucky to share such kisses with you right now! (kiss on cheek) This is sweet and gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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19 posted 2003-01-27 11:28 AM


neat write!
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