Open Poetry #12 |
The Meadow |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
The Meadonw by Michael Auguste There’s a gently sloping meadow of scarlet and ivory wildflowers where I often go to sit and think. In the distance is a lake where I sometimes skip stones, or just cool my feet. The water is almost always still and mirrors the clouds and surrounding landscape. On either side are small mountains, covered in old growth fir and spruce trees. As the sun sets, shadows from these forests come running on stealthy feet and cloak the meadow’s colors in different shades of night. It is then that the lake becomes a watery heaven and all of the stars are within my reach. Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely description of this meadow...the meaning of my last name is "one who dwells in the meadows"...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael--This is a beautiful place to go to see stars within reach, my friend...you have brought it to life with your words. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 03-13-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MichaelA~ How totally beautiful ! 'It is then that the lake becomes a watery heaven and all of the stars are within my reach.' What a lovely reflection of thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
You've described a beautiful place. Hope it is a protected place. If not, you should see to it. It will be written about again. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
James, Martie, Marge and Krawdad, It pleases me that you enjoyed this piece. The meadow exists only in my imagination. Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. A peaceful and pleasant day to each of you. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
This is perfect!!! Loved it. Packratmike |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is beautiful! It may dwell in your imagination, but you could be describing a meadow I know of in Northern Idaho where I live. I go there often in the growing season to enjoy the beauty. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Packrat, Thanks for the "perfect." :-) Glad you like it. Michael Trillium, I've always wanted to visit Idaho. It's such a beautiful state. Thank you for liking this piece. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Revisit...James |
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