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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-02-07 04:24 PM


Year of the Dog

I feel unimportant.
I feel unnecessary.
I feel left out in the rain to soak with no rudder to steer my boat.
Left in the sun to dry not ever knowing a reason why.
Left on the side of the road all alone unable to find my happy home.
As I stare at stormy skies I wonder why I even try.
I feel like friendships are hard to make.
Why does she now hesitate and jam on the brakes while I watch all traces of love drown in the lake.
I understand the way a dog feels when he is kicked by his master.
Yet I have no master.
Only this life of pain and disaster.
Why do people kick their dogs?

Jameslee@February07,2001

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-02-07 07:02 PM


another of life's eternal questions my friend. . .

wonderful from you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2001-02-07 07:34 PM


Some people are just mean Jimmy.....brilliant poem!

Nathan

athena4
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3 posted 2001-02-07 07:42 PM


James,
   This is wonderful! A portait of such deep pain, and a yearning for answers.  I hope you will find yours...
        Elise

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-05-24 12:14 PM


Thank you Sven, Nate and Athens for the nice responses....I think people kick their dogs because they don't appreciate them...James
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