Open Poetry #12 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
before I was dust when I was but a gleam in my Father’s eyes before my DNA had a name He knew me © March 10, 2001 |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, he did........vey nice VAS SEA |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Very interesting, few words that said it all. Very good subject. Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So true...clever idea for a thought provoking poem !! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi VAS, The one thing we can all fall back on when things are out of reach is this one fact, I loved the powerful impack this gives, Love, Cerentiy "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Interesting and I enjoyed reading this. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
VAS,I liked it |
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Panne Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 15South TX, USA |
VAS, Great piece. I thoroughly enjoyed the read - short, concise, and powerfully to the point. Panne |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
Powerfully simple and true! This is something that I could see on an inspirational picture, book mark or the like...I think it would be perfect. Jellybean King |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Wow, powerful indeed! Wonderful. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Liking this... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
True,true,true. Lovely expressed! |
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