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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-12 05:37 AM

this morn
my heart wants to
follow you but my eyes
stay closed, lid gripping lid, needing
prying

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-03-12 05:41 AM

Wynter I can come and pry them apart for you...but it might be too late! Oh well, I tried ....I enjoyed the write and I love the implications of keeping your eyes closed to avoid waking into a world of hurt....take care ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-03-12 06:14 AM

E, I am glad you enjoy my words..and interpret them as such..I am always in awe..as I don't think I ever get my messages across *s.. actually my heart wants to read the words this morning, but my eyes are so tired, I am so tired, I can't get them to stay open long enough to do so..although I manage now one word at a blink *s huggzz

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-03-12 07:30 AM

Wynter -

this morn
my heart wants to
follow you but my eyes
stay closed, lid gripping lid, needing
prying

this precious morn
my heart is yours and
follows you, my lips touch
your soft eyes opening them
as they say good morning

BC

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-12 06:50 PM

perhaps you need glasses. . .

(and no, not rose colored ones!)

wonderful Wynter. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-03-12 09:07 PM

So much said in so few words. I could relate to each one of them. Thanks.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2001-03-12 09:13 PM

Sometimes, I feel like that. So much said, in such few words, excellent!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-03-12 10:27 PM

Some days, it's easier than others. If it was raining there like it was here this morning, I can see why!!

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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