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Emergence--dedicated to Mysteria
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Emergence--dedicated to Mysteria |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Virginia Salter with layers of pain mistrust agony as if deep within a dark, dark well that’d been sealed yet somehow something of Someone began to tear at the layer upon layer allowing tiny rays of light to seep into her chamber each ray building her strength that she began tearing from within layer upon layer peeled away as she emerged one wing at a time then, in the sunlight drying to a flight of new life © March 11, 2001 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
REVISION*****please read this instead! Emergence -dedicated to Mysteria Virginia Salter enshrouded with layers of pain mistrust agony as if deep within a dark, dark well that’d been sealed yet somehow something of Someone began to tear at layer upon layer allowing tiny rays of light to seep into her chamber each ray building her strength able to begin tearing from within layer upon layer peeled away as she emerged one wing at a time then, in the sunlight drying to a flight of new life © March 11, 2001 |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Inspiring poem.Thanks,I loved it. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Tony! Geesh! I just saw another mistake, a typo this time. 'of Someone' should read 'or Someone.' Maybe I should have remained speechless. :O\ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Vas, this is beautiful, very touching! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well you don't know me yet do you? I am never speechless! lol Well, I have to tell you that your comment via a complete poem of compassion is harder for someone like me to take than being mistreated, believe it or not. You see when you loose your esteem, all the words and flowers in the world don't make you feel worthwhile. I notice the icon you used was a dove, which is my favorite symbol, as they stand for hope and peace in my mind. You have taken a weary soul today and put a lighth in my heart, and sent some hope and peace to my soul. I thank you so very much for doing this. True compassion is the caring for a stranger and that is what you did today. There is a poem on the board today by PrincessPout called compassion, and beside it should be your picture! A big ole hug and mooshie kiss on the cheek for ya! Thank you so much. |
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