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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-03-10 08:09 PM


See this woman, she is real
made of flesh and bone and pain
don't discount her as your due
she is born of fire and rain.

Stop pretending you don't know
watch her heart beat just for you
Look upon reality
feel her love of honest truth.

Touch your own heart once again
without her you may not feel
passions' riches, loves' caress
just the shallow bits you steal.

She can give you sweet refrain
take away the lonliness
lest you leave her jagged torn
only hearts of emptiness.

See this women, she's been cut
she is real and she does bleed
knowing not which way to turn
feel the feeling, touch the need.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-03-10 08:32 PM


when we can see others like this. . . we can know them. . .

excellent Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2001-03-10 08:37 PM


~"she is real",...Yes! She is! - Sandra, this is incredibly powerful. Feeling you. *Peace sweets.
athena4
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since 2000-12-10
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3 posted 2001-03-10 09:09 PM


Sandra,
Your depth of longing and love is so beautiful in this. If only he truly knew what a gift he has...
Love, Elise

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-03-10 09:20 PM


Cat...you may meow now....
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