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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-03-10 04:35 PM



I LIVE FOR,
THE MOMENT WHEN WE CAN BE ONE.
just surrender.
ANTICIPATING,
THIS SPACE IN TIME WHEN YOU AND I WILL BE TOGETHER.
IN MY DAYS,
I DREAM YOU.
IN MY NIGHTS,
I FEEL YOU.
just surrender.
THIS PASSION,
CANNOT BE CONTAINED.
IT'S DORMANT,
UNTIL IT BREATHS YOU.
THEN IT AWAKES,AND IT THRISTS ONLY FOR YOU
THIS LOVE AGONIZES,
HOPING THAT ONE DAY YOU'LL LOVE ME.
NO REMEDY,
FOR THIS THERE IS.
BELIEVE ME,
I'VE KISS OTHER LIPS,
BUT NONE I WANT BUT YOURS.
THIS NEVER ENDING LOVE
just WANTS YOU TO surrender.
DON'T MAKE ME LIVE LIKE THIS,
PLEASE DON'T RESIST, GIVE IN TO
THIS EMOTION.
I'LL GIVE YOU,
ALL THE LOVE YOU NEED.



A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-03-10 09:01 PM


shout it from the hills walker!!!

this is excellent. . .

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