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Open Poetry #12

A Dream so Real

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-10 04:44 PM

A candelit room
With a beautiful view
Nobody but us here
Just we two

The aroma or rose oil
Brings our senses alive
With your love all around me
It's all I need to survive

Every love song I hear
Reminds me of you
To this haven I escape
Whenever I feel blue
How sensual are your hands
As I respond to your touch
The feeling is exquisite
It's almost too much

You clasp hold of my hands
As I look down on you
Into your beautiful blue eyes
What a lovely view

Such love we had made
But how sad was I to know
As we lay in love's sweet afterglow
That all of this wasn't real
It was only a dream
But, oh how real did it seem?

Suetang

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

1 posted 2001-03-10 05:18 PM

I've had many a dreams like this, so I like this one

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-03-10 08:58 PM

dreams can be more real than you know. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-03-10 10:04 PM

Are you sure? Really?

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