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Kiss Me In The Morning
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Kiss Me In The Morning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kiss Me In The Morning Another day without my sweetheart I suppose. Another day down that long and lonesome road. I'm not on her calendar of events it seems. She doesn't share my hope and doesn't dream my dreams. I presume she won't call me today. Why would she when she doesn't have anything good to say. Oh she could call and say she's sorry once again. But if she's so sorry why did our love come to an end? And why am I going down that long and lonesome road? And when will I lose this heavy burdened load? And where is the woman that kissed me so passionatly? And how can I smile without her as close as she used to be? And who will kiss me in the morning and cook bacon and eggs for me? LOL Jameslee@March10,2001 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How about french toast? This is so sad hon...but have faith...I know you do...HUGS and KISSES!!!!!! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I absolutely loved this James, but shouldn't it be who will I cook bacon and eggs for? haha, you know us women! we love service.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Paula french toast or french kisses will work... Rosebud I was thinking of that song "one less bell to answer...one less egg to fry"...lol..James |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is really touching and I can tell written from the heart. Well done! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is really touching and I can tell written from the heart. Well done! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was so beautiful, romantic and sad all at the same time and I loved the last line! Suetang |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
this sad, but I lke it Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful James. . . with that touch of melancholy. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Sadly lovely... So sad but also such a flowing poem.. I love it all except for the eggs... I am not a breakfast person! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 JamesMichael~I would kiss you in the morning and all through the day ... If you'd just cook the breakfast to get me on my way ! Then perhaps a brunch to continue a little nibble - I don't care who serves it ... Oh, sweetie, let's not quibble. On to a snack of afternoon delight - then I'll kiss you until dinner time - and far into the night ! JamesMichaelYou've been kissed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
The "realness" of this touched me deeply. With a gentle smile at the end. I enjoyed reading this. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
And the endless search continues? Enjoyed this J M, nice work. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Walker, Suetang, Moon Dust, Sven, voiceless, Marge, JustAWoman and Kraawdad for the wonderful responses... Marge I love all those kisses. Yes Krawdad the search continues for the bliss of a kiss....James |
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