Open Poetry #12 |
You don’t know me |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
You don’t know me…I’m a fan… I take your thoughts inside my head, and devour them like sweet pieces of ambrosia… Savoring each meaning, until I’ve drained their juices dry… Sometimes your words are so intimate… I feel as if they are meant for only me… But, how could that be? You don’t know me… No, you don’t know me… but we share our thoughts, our emotions, our ups and downs… Painting on a shared canvas, we are splashing with words of many colors… Side by side, we share this love, this art… We touch each other’s souls and hearts, but how could that be? You don’t know me… You don’t know me…yet… not by name, or sight, or touch… But you do know you…deep down, where no one can see, where you hide the real you… You know the laughter that bubbles up, at the wrong moments… And the tears that are kept behind your eyes… You know your own heart, and write of pain, sorrow, love and life… You don’t know me…or…Do you? Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Lovely. And you have captured in words emotioins which we all have experienced at one time or the other. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
That is the beauty of reading others poetry...the times you connect and feel as if you do know them...and of course some reveal much of themselves thru their writing...James |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Poetry brings all of us closer together! Betty Lou Hebert |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yes, i know you! you're a poet! |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Beautifully said, Sunnyone, and so very true. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love this poem, I feel like that too. |
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