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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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daylight descends and again I rise to greet the fading light with open arms night comes shadows fall across the land covering the sorrow of another day healing the pain of another life the moon does not rise lest it reveal too much to the eye I have only asked the stars to shine as they guide the heart home at my command the night wind carries and caresses the broken heart healing the hurt and pain that comes from revealing too much of itself in the light of love on those winds the heart dreams the heart hopes and in that moment I make them come true if only for that moment the heart returns healed by the winds of night ready again to face the trials of the light I have taken its pain to myself for I am the Darkness and in my black light the heart is made whole and love never dies ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh beautiful.........When the reader feels right there, you done good!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fabulous writing, Sven. Great expression! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Sven...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ I'm jumping on the bandwagon with Denise ! This is beautiful expression. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
they say the Sun heals but the night... it congeals unity... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
AAh Sven you have no idea how this appeals to my soul, or do you?  Brilliant, beautiful *sigh*. If only I could write this sort of thing!!!!!!Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dear heart, I'm awed by this utterly beautiful piece of yours love, absolutely perfect. You know that if I could I'd stay within this haven forever. Utterly Stunning I really love this one, the lines that keeps running through my head is in Romeo and Juliet ============================================= And he will make the face of heaven so fine That all the world will be in love with night And pay no worship to the garish sun ============================================ Absolutely fabulous love and warm stuff Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this, as always. But those last few lines, WOW, even more gripping than usual. I am darkness.. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
dreamkeeper, I'm glad to know that I've done good!! Thank you. . . Denise, thank you. . . I'm working on being more expressive. . . James, thank you my friend. . . Marge, there's always room for one more!! Thank you. . . Sunshine, yes, the night brings us closer. . . thank you my friend. . . Isis, yes, I do have some idea. . . and who says that you can't write like this??Bubbles love, thank you so much. . . I love those lines from the Bard. . . they fit superbly here. . . Sandra, thank you. . . I am honored that you liked this. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh...Sven..Nothing short of amazing...nothing short of beautiful, and nothing short of your purest and kindest self. ((HUGS)) I do love this!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You weave it so very well...from your soul to your pen....to our hearts...beautiful work Sven~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is deep and powerful Sven....you've expressed yourself very well too....great writing! Nathan |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sven, you have written another winner and the words can be used by many. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, ME |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven-- wow...this was just so lovely. such a powerful and beautiful write this is. i was just at such peace as i read through this beauty of yours. take care. amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely said! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoy when you write like this..it seems to come from deeper within ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"the heart returns healed by the winds of night ready again to face the trials of the light I have taken it's pain to myself for I am the darkness and in my black light the heart is made whole and love never dies" ========================= Wow - yes, yes, very well expressed laced with hope, it's so good to see words of faith from you, just lovely! Take care, Melissa~ The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams ~Melissa P. Monette~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Temptress, thank you. . . glad that you like it. . .  BDC, thank you my friend. . . consider it a gift. . . Nate, thank you. . . ME, thank you for letting me share. . . I'm glad that you can take these words. . . Amy, thank you. . . peace is all that I ask for my friend. . . walker, thank you so much!! Wynter, thank you. . . glad that you can see it. . . Melissa, thank you my friend. . . there will always be hope. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I have only asked the stars to shine as they guide the heart home" oh big sighs Sven.....this is perfect... just perfect...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
to myself for I am the Darkness and in my black light the heart is made whole and love never dies" Sven quit taking the pain for others and go out and find happiness. |
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