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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-03-11 07:26 PM


My independent nature led
To many places and I said
That I was glad to be away
From the tedium each day
Brought about, in my home town.
Life there used to get me down.

I traveled widely, loved my job
And never thought how time would rob
Me of the opportunity
To see things as they used to be.
For by the time that I returned,
All my bridges had been burned.

Nobody seemed to care that I
Had wandered back or wondered why,
But suddenly I yearn I find,
For treasures that I've left behind.
For friendships lost and family,
I realize means much to me.

I hope it's not too late to dwell
In this spot I know so well
And be an active, caring part
Of those closest to my heart.
To savor small town life and strive
To keep my heritage alive.


Betty Lou Hebert

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 03-11-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-03-11 07:36 PM


Very nice Betty and I'm sure you'll be welcomed back. Love, Joyce
Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2001-03-11 08:39 PM


It'll grow ...
You like you there, that's half the battle

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-03-11 09:37 PM


BettyLou~
Oh, I like this.

Rod McKuen said, "You can go home again, despite your Thomas Wolfe. Never do so on the train, but on the train of thought."

I've often taken both !

Most reflective ponder.
I like ponders !
~*Marge*~



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inot2B
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4 posted 2001-03-11 09:43 PM


Enjoyed your poem very much. My home is where ever I'm at, that way I'm always home.
Trillium
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5 posted 2001-03-11 11:30 PM


To: Joyce, Marge, Rex and inot2b,

thanks all for reading this poem and commenting.

Betty Lou Hebert

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