Open Poetry #12 |
Letting You Go |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
***this shall be my last post about Laura--most of you know we were very close and then suddenly no longer were together--to those of you who have no clue what i'm talking about, i still hope you enjoy this poem or at least get something out of it. thank you in advance for reading. "Letting You Go" letting you go was one of the hardest things i've ever had to do i never thought we'd part always thought i'd be with you lies and games though took their toll our lives were changed forever so now i sadly let you go no longer are we together always you shall hold a place in my heart though things are different now in many ways i still will think of you from time to time i wish you nothing but love and happiness to fill your days you were the one true love of my life everything i ever said to you was true you just didnt ever realize how much i loved you seriously don't think you ever had a clue some days i think of you and smile others i think of you and cry if i ever said i dont miss you that would be a bold faced lie but things are better this way sometimes things just aren't meant to be and we have to find a way to set the other person free so fly butterfly i hope you reach the sky never look back with regrets do not cry i released you a while ago but today i just wanted to let you know as your lover and best friend i completely let you go Amy M. Kennedy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I am sure there are many have had to release a loved one, and not knowing the story did not take away from your wonderful presentation, an excellent poem and a fond farewell too. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, Oh, this was so tender and honest. It is never easy to let them go, but we have to in order to move on. You'll find another love. I know you will. Someone as sweet as you won't be alone for long. This was wonderful writing my friend. Keep it up and you will heal in no time. ((((HUG)))). Jen Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Hi, Amy. Your poem feels so genuine to read, it is surely a song of truth. Thanks for sharing such a personal and beautiful piece of writing. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
always you shall hold a place in my heart though things are different now in many ways i still will think of you from time to time i wish you nothing but love and happiness to fill your days You have such a beautiful heart Amy beautifully written Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but things are better this way sometimes things just aren't meant to be and we have to find a way to set the other person free so fly butterfly i hope you reach the sky never look back with regrets do not cry i released you a while ago but today i just wanted to let you know as your lover and best friend i completely let you go ====================== with time and release comes healing for you both. All we can do is try to draw from what we learned about ourselves and hope to grow stronger in the losses... you two made many self discoveries and showed much courage ... you continue to do so with this. hugs sweetie love ya me Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
so fly butterfly i hope you reach the sky never look back with regrets do not cry i released you a while ago but today i just wanted to let you know as your lover and best friend i completely let you go Oh Amy girl...this tugs at my heart...so beautiful and selfless...yes my dear I'm speaking of you...winged with gossmer wings you gave love your all and now the most loving gift of all...beautiful writing from a most beautiful heart. AW hugs to you sweet girl~ |
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