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To The World |
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Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
Once there was an image i held in my mind of everything I wanted me to be it was a little blurred at the edges with some gaps here and there so I filled the questions in with what it seemed the world would want but like a virus the world's image spread slowly eating peice by peice the image I had for myself when finally there was nothing left of my hopes or my dreams only what the world wanted from one little peice the whole was destroyed. Isaiah 1:18 "Everybody loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" -All Together Seperate |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've written well of the dangers of trying to be someone you're not, trying to please someone else and losing you in the process. *S* Good job! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Allstaria, I have to agree with Suthern 100% on this one, but you are not the only one believe me! I have spent most of my life doing just that thing but you can find your way to understanding "you" and gain back what you lost, and you did a awesome job on getting your thoughts out in to your poem in fact I would like to put it in my library, thank you so much, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I can relate to this, so very much, but could never have written it so clearly and deeply as you did. I compliment you! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I like what you say. I like how you say it. |
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