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Thoughts of You
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Thoughts of You |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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I sit alone I watch the sun It seems to smile on everyone How warm the sand beneath my feet The waves they lap as if to greet Such beauty all around I see So amazing that it's all for free The sun it seems to warm my heart Not easy will it be to part So alone I feel without you here My love for you is always near Taken away before your time My heart seems lost as it does pine I see you as I walk these sands As I remember so fondly your warming hands What I'd give to see you once again My heart would shine and start to sing How comforting for me to dream of you But my heart seems to have a different view It knows you won't come back to me It takes a while for me to see My love is strong and will always be Such precious times for you and me As I watch the sun sink oh so low The time wasn't right for you to go I live to face another day Knowing how you'd want it that way Time can't change - can't bring you back My memory is strong and right on track Thoughts of you will come and go In my heart you'll be safe with me, I know The gulls take flight The moon is full I turn and walk up to the hill I stand and let the moon reflect On times we had - I'll never forget Sleep peacefully and think of me You're part of the moon, the sun and the sea Suetang |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful..I loved it *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
love the nature theme, absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You have capture a beautiful way to remember your loss. God be with you. Melton |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Simply Beautiful.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful thoughts here. Welcome to Passions.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The gulls take flight The moon is full I turn and walk up to the hill I stand and let the moon reflect On times we had - I'll never forget Sleep peacefully and think of me You're part of the moon, the sun and the sea ====================== this is lovley and written with sincerety and softness in its longing... beautiful imagery and emotions laced together Welcome to passions Sue so nice to meet you .. your poem reminded me of a song that is a fav of mine... its my reminder of someone special who is among the stars now. I hope you dont mind me sharing it with you take care jm On The Sea Vertical Horizon from the cd:Live Stages No fog clear in the moonlight The stars shine so bright now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close Now I will reach for the stars Because Oh my love, that's where you are Chorus: Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea Waves crash break the silence Gulls cry a song of lament I walk on through the stormy night The air cries flash of anger Dark night enshrouds the stranger all alone without you Now I will reach for the stars Because Oh my love, that's where you are Chorus No fog clear in the moonlight The stars shine so bright now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touching my face Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close Now I will reach for the stars Because Oh my love, that's where you are Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
Very touching....I share those feelings with you. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The time is never right. Loved these words. |
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