Open Poetry #12 |
Lies of Love (name that tune? PdV challenge) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now I want no more of it-- this time is farewell... I've never known the joy of it-- I've only tasted hell. For every time I'd pirhouette, I'd stumble on my own... Always pairs of eyes in stare mistaken for my home. I whisper lies of love, just to face the morrow with the winged dove fly--retreat from sorrow (every breeze a joy in borrow) and with every wisp of worry that I soar through-- to know that I'm not with you? I whisper lies of love... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've never known the joy of it-- I've only tasted hell. For every time I'd pirhouette, I'd stumble on my own... ====================== I whisper lies of love, just to face the morrow with the winged dove fly--retreat from sorrow (every breeze a joy in borrow) and with every wisp of worry that I soar through-- to know that I'm not with you? I whisper lies of love... =================== "(every breeze a joy in borrow) and with every wisp of worry that I soar through-- to know that I'm not with you?" your muse is a beautiful thing to me.. ya know? ... (the one that writes from inside you) YOU KNOW what I mean ... (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis) love ya me twin me Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serentiy, This is wonderful.... SEA |
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POETIC THUG Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42HOUSTON TEXAS BABY |
Hey, we all have these feelings at least we here at passions have a realese for them.Well thats just this Poetic Thugs opinion. |
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POETIC THUG Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42HOUSTON TEXAS BABY |
Hey, we all have these feelings at least we here at passions have a realese for them.Well thats just this Poetic Thugs opinion. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hmm....what is this song? You wrote this so well!!! But I can't figure out what song this is....hmmmmmm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Should I tell yet? Hint: It's by the carpenters.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AH girl...but the CARPENTERS? Lol its truly lovely sweetie... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YES MIZZ P---THE CARPENTERS...and? "goodbye to love" happens to be my new theme song...oh...DRAT!!! lol...but truly Karen Carpenter had one of the richest voices I've ever heard--(and yes..music I listen to is VERY diverse... ) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
the Carpenters? Oh my....don't tell me yet!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Serenity...James |
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