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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-03-09 02:20 AM


Now I want no more of it--
this time is farewell...
I've never known the joy of it--
I've only tasted hell.

For every time I'd pirhouette,
I'd stumble on my own...
Always pairs of eyes in stare
mistaken for my home.

I whisper lies of love,
just to face the morrow
with the winged dove
fly--retreat from sorrow
(every breeze a joy in borrow)
and with every wisp of worry
that I soar through--
to know that I'm not with you?

I whisper lies of love...


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-03-09 09:50 AM


I've never known the joy of it--
I've only tasted hell.

For every time I'd pirhouette,
I'd stumble on my own...
======================

I whisper lies of love,
just to face the morrow
with the winged dove
fly--retreat from sorrow
(every breeze a joy in borrow)
and with every wisp of worry
that I soar through--
to know that I'm not with you?

I whisper lies of love...
===================

"(every breeze a joy in borrow)
and with every wisp of worry
that I soar through--
to know that I'm not with you?"


your muse is a beautiful thing to me.. ya know? ...
(the one that writes from inside you)
YOU KNOW what I mean ...
(ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)
love ya me twin
me



Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-03-09 09:51 AM


Serentiy, This is wonderful.... SEA
POETIC THUG
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HOUSTON TEXAS BABY
3 posted 2001-03-09 10:46 AM


Hey, we all have these feelings at least we
here at passions have a realese for them.Well
thats just this Poetic Thugs opinion.

POETIC THUG
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4 posted 2001-03-09 10:46 AM


Hey, we all have these feelings at least we
here at passions have a realese for them.Well
thats just this Poetic Thugs opinion.

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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2001-03-09 02:04 PM


Hmm....what is this song?

You wrote this so well!!! But I can't figure out what song this is....hmmmmmm

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2001-03-09 02:11 PM


Should I tell yet? Hint: It's by the carpenters....
Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2001-03-09 02:18 PM


AH girl...but the CARPENTERS? Lol its truly lovely sweetie...
serenity blaze
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8 posted 2001-03-09 02:23 PM


YES MIZZ P---THE CARPENTERS...and? "goodbye to love" happens to be my new theme song...oh...DRAT!!! lol...but truly Karen Carpenter had one of the richest voices I've ever heard--(and yes..music I listen to is VERY diverse... )
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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2001-03-09 02:23 PM


the Carpenters? Oh my....don't tell me yet!!!!



JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-03-09 02:26 PM


Very nice Serenity...James
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