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Love Ain't No Longer There
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Love Ain't No Longer There |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Cathy Mae acts a new way now she's acting bold she'd lie to know that young guy even though she's old. It's hard to swallow life prints when shaping time begins. Her mother's holy advice said she'd always get her man. She has no time fears but what is waiting for her? Never thought she'd be alone her bridges all burned. Love ain't no longer there. Love ain't no greying hair. Love ain't no wrinkled glare. Love ain't no drunked up stare. There's a coming up a party if the young man does respond, he'd like to take her out of there and fake her lovin on. He's been waiting for the prime time now he's mocking her. He'd like to leave her on her own after she's disturbed. She has those fine years but what is waiting for her? Never thought she'd be outdone with issues to learn. Love ain't no longer there. Love ain't no make-up flare. Love ain't no dressed up care. Love ain't past seasons bared. She must decide what it is that needs her concern. Who's gonna carry her through the waste that she'll earn? Will she know when to stop and see herself once more? Or will she keep on whirling across the bar room floors? She has those wine tears but what is it she will learn? Never thought she'd be alone four walls surrounding her. Love ain't no longer there. Love ain't no fancy fare. Love ain't no daydream prayers. Love ain't one night affairs. The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 03-08-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A truer story than yanno  I love your lyrical tales ethome...keep em coming sweet 'un! They make me wanna sing. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ I like this !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric--figures that with a name like yours, you'd write true..but this is so well done, so like a story that I'd like to read the whole of...really enjoyed, my friend...thanks. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
fantastic read, Ethome Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Eric...mmmm I can hear you singing this one all the way down here...this is great!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It's hard to swallow life prints when shaping time begins. =================== She has no time fears but what is waiting for her? Never thought she'd be alone her bridges all burned. ==================== Love ain't no drunked up stare. ==================== She must decide what it is that needs her concern. Who's gonna carry her through the waste that she'll earn? =================== She has those wine tears but what is it she will learn? Never thought she'd be alone four walls surrounding her. Love ain't no longer there. Love ain't no fancy fare. Love ain't no daydream prayers. Love ain't one night affairs. ================== "It's hard to swallow life prints when shaping time begins." what a very cool line that is ... E-babes this is van-fantastic what a creative and unique collection of verses and rhymes patterns you have penned here I can see ya sitting on a stool playing this one acoustic in a smokey lil pub somewhere very cool write my poet-pal  groovy too Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome....what you have captured....! well done.... library.... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow.........very powerful.....I liked this a lot SEA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a world of wisdom you've captured in the last two lines... and they are but the signature on a very well written work! *S* |
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