A Snowy Night (please take the time to read)

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Open Poetry #12

A Snowy Night (please take the time to read)

Pickering8
Junior Member

since 2000-12-12

Posts 10
Redlands California

0 posted 2001-03-08 01:12 AM

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I sit with the fire as my only light,
It is my protection against the dark night,
I look out the window to only see the snowy white,
I’m looking for you to come to me tonight.

I wish you were here,
So I could whisper in your ear,
And try to make those tears disappear,
God, how I want to hold you my dear.

I wonder if I’ll ever get to hold you,
Some say not as long as the sky is blue,
And some times, I think so too,
While all along I kinda already knew.

But, then I hear you at my door,
My heart nearly hits the floor,
Then my heart rate begins to soar,
Will you be with mine forever more?

We then lock in a sweet embrace,
I can’t help but stare into your beautiful face,
I become lost in all your grace,
All my fears begin to erase.

[This message has been edited by Pickering8 (edited 03-08-2001).]

Pickering8
Junior Member

since 2000-12-12

Posts 10
Redlands California

1 posted 2001-03-08 01:19 AM

O, that this too too solid flesh would melt
Thaw and resolve itself into a dew!
Or that the Everlasting had not fix'd
His canon 'gainst self-slaughter! O God! God!
How weary, stale, flat and unprofitable,
Seem to me all the uses of this world!
-Hamlet (it was too long to fit in my signature box.)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2001-03-08 10:45 AM

I enjoyed your poem very much. And one of the great things about this place is that you don't have to plead with people to read... you just have to post. *S* Even if the replies aren't numerous, your work is being read. *S* Welcome!

sans38
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 117
Westland, Michigan

3 posted 2001-03-08 10:51 AM

This poem was absolutely beautiful!! I truly enjoyed reading it!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-03-08 10:53 AM

welcome to passions

enjoy it

Pickering8
Junior Member

since 2000-12-12

Posts 10
Redlands California

5 posted 2001-03-09 01:32 AM

thank you guys! and also one of the great things about this place is I can share my poems with strangers with out the fear of their disapproval.

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