Whispers In The Dark II----for Rexs' challenge

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Open Poetry #12

Whispers In The Dark II----for Rexs' challenge

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

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missouri

0 posted 2001-03-08 12:55 PM

Feathers floating round
Love words whispered in the dark
Feathers and a kiss.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-08 08:49 AM

Oh, jeez, let's ruffle some feathers!!!!

No, I mean not you and me, us and whoever!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-03-08 01:31 PM

That's a cool image. Light, feathery kisses. Much preferred to the Whap! Ha!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-03-08 11:21 PM

Kathleen...LOL lets go...where should we start?

JLR...LOL you NEEDED the WHAP!!!!but the kisses are nice as well...thanks

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

4 posted 2001-03-09 04:37 PM

Within twinkled eye
spontaneousness combusts
enticing moments
~~~
I like the way you fight, Paula
very nicely written

Sorry I didn't get back sooner, but my internet was down

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

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missouri

5 posted 2001-03-10 01:28 AM

Rex....enticing moments
playing in feathered softness
kissed and kissed again.....

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-03-11 05:28 PM

So concise but so sensual...well done!!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

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missouri

7 posted 2001-03-12 12:29 PM

Hehehe thanks ethome...its Rex's fault he challeneged me...

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