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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-03-08 12:55 PM


Feathers floating round
Love words whispered in the dark
Feathers and a kiss.

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-03-08 08:49 AM


Oh, jeez, let's ruffle some feathers!!!!

No, I mean not you and me, us and whoever!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JLR
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2 posted 2001-03-08 01:31 PM


That's a cool image. Light, feathery kisses. Much preferred to the Whap! Ha!
Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-03-08 11:21 PM


Kathleen...LOL lets go...where should we start?

JLR...LOL you NEEDED the WHAP!!!!but the kisses are nice as well...thanks


Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 2001-03-09 04:37 PM


Within twinkled eye
spontaneousness combusts
enticing moments
~~~
I like the way you fight, Paula
very nicely written

Sorry I didn't get back sooner, but my internet was down

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2001-03-10 01:28 AM


Rex....enticing moments
playing in feathered softness
kissed and kissed again.....

ethome
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6 posted 2001-03-11 05:28 PM


So concise but so sensual...well done!!
Paula Finn
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7 posted 2001-03-12 12:29 PM


Hehehe thanks ethome...its Rex's fault he challeneged me...
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