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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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Gone Helen, Your gone. Clothes all pack’d. Your leaving is now fact. Hoping your new live does well. Keep in touch, for you know the cell. For both of us, our wings can now spread. To the direction you what your life to be lead. The promises & advice of friends you never meet. You can now act upon & then your life will be set. You closed the door, to my Love in your heart. Mother'd our children, don’t keep them apart. Driveway, still waits for your car to park. Your dog, Harper has lost his bark. Door is open, to come home. You don’t have to roam. With all my Love. Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I read this several times because I love the emotion you're able to express in this. Or that you've expressed so well. Sadness, forgiveness, understanding, and love. Forgiveness of someones mistakes is a gift treasured, and you seem so willing to do that. Beautiful. And excellent set-up! "One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is sad, Bernie. You've got to try to trust that everything happens for a reason. Words, I'm sure that I will be eating later...sigh. Heartbreaking. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
It won't help you to know that this same situation on your part is filled with remorse from her heart as well. But when some words are said, sometimes there is never a going back. I wish you the very best...I truly do. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
dreamkeeper... thank you for seeing what i tried to release in my words. And this is the first time i have every tried to put a form like this together.. A real poet i am not, but have just been putting feeling to words. serenity...thank you for your response, sad is not what i am trying to be though, trying to understand would be more like it. But to offer the mind and heart that was once there, and that it will never leave, though seperate and apart, still together. Lady in White....A very true statement...ty Thanks again....Bernie Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-08-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Why do these things have to happen? Hopefully she will realize what she's seeking is right back in your arms. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Brought to the front request for Paula... to read.. jsom |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is full of emotions. Well written. Hope all your dreams come true. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bernie...a REAL poet you ARE...you write your heart...a poets truest ambition... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bernie...you know as well as i do why i left...please dont try to cover an ugly thing over with beautiful words.....please stop this...they dont know the history...i find this very sad on your part...people dont walk away from 23 year year marriages cause someone left the tooth paste lid off the tube...& love didnt die...you killed it....& its ok...just as always ill take all the blame as well as the pain...helen |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Helen (1slick_lady) or what ever your new name is, please stop repling to my poems. Pick up a phone and call. but please leave my poems alone, for i have left yours alone.. Thank you Bernie Slicker |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So much said even within the title...lots of feelings within...hoping for you...it only works when two are willing to keep trying...James |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Hey James i agree, but only one side is willing to work at it, I think that you can see what side that is.. Thank You Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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