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Celeste
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0 posted 2001-03-06 07:09 PM


Even in my sadness I still know
that I have been so blessed
I've known incredible deep love
and joy
that overflowed my heart
as I could only stand with tears streaming
in the wonder of what life can be

I've danced and laughed and chased fireflies
with my children
Tugged smiles out of fierce little boys
Wiped tears and captured hugs
Taught and also learned
with each of them

I've had friends that
enriched me
Loved me no matter my faults
Forgave my quirks
and listened patiently to my storms
when I was overwhelmed

And I've known love
Completely
Shared laughter and thoughts
dreams and tears
Bared the deepest parts of myself
in quiet whispers and
candlelight

So I can smile even through tears
and I can watch the heavy gray clouds
the bitter winds of change
that seem unending
and know that I'm still me
But more importantly
that I've known richness, beauty and depth
Intangible treasures
And I am blessed


"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one."

© Copyright 2001 Celeste - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2001-03-06 07:17 PM


You are a lucky person to recognize your blessings.
Melton

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-03-06 07:20 PM


'Even in the sadness...
Tugged smiles out of fierce little boys'

Thank you for reminding me.

JCGF
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since 2001-01-19
Posts 72
MA
3 posted 2001-03-06 07:36 PM


NICE! I like it alot.

Tam

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2001-03-06 07:39 PM


dreamkeeper - you write with much wisdom, but also I see some sadness. But you are gifted, with all that you love so dearly.

BC

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5 posted 2001-03-28 08:04 PM


and we are blessed with your words. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

6 posted 2001-04-01 11:04 PM


Celeste..."..Tugged smiles out of fierce little boys.." Perfect.   Bob
Red-uni
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 192
Georgia, USA
7 posted 2001-04-02 10:09 PM


WOW.  I know what you mean.  Awesome, I also feel that I have been blessed, even though now I am going through a hard time.  It will work out okay.  
NIAI
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since 2001-03-29
Posts 52

8 posted 2001-04-04 12:56 PM


Thanks;  I'm in my 50's and only recently have taken the time to " look in the mirror " I'm struggling with the disasters, most self imposed, of my life. I try daily now to appreciate the blessings in my life. It's not always easy, but at times a message is sent that make the self evaluation easier. Your poem is just such a message.

                           NIAI

                     niai@eznet.net
                  

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