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You Touched Me
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You Touched Me |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Not knowing what the end would be, I closed my eyes and searched inside my soul... Within it’s depths, a voice was whispering, loud enough to shake my self-control... I closed my ears, and struggled all in vain, to close the doorways to my mind... That voice kept promising of all the love I need, if I touched you…I’d find... It stayed with me in fitful dreams and whispered me awake, at dawn’s first light... I still could feel the warm embrace I shared with you in dreams, throughout the night... And as I sat there sipping on a cup of Mother Nature’s morning brew... The cobwebs disappeared and suddenly, I knew just what I had to do... I dropped my will and pride, I held my breath, and then I knew I could begin... I asked the dreaded question, that I knew would make or break us in the end... I’ve seen the “do you love me?” ‘s tear the strongest friends apart, because of fear... As I waited for your answer, I could feel my face receive my falling tears... Then, suddenly, like lover’s hands that reach across the miles for just one touch... The answer came...”I love you, too, and someday I will show you just how much”! My heart took flight on wings as free and gentle as the peaceful, cooing dove... Then landed in your hands that touched me, giving you my everlasting love... And if by choice of fate, there comes a time we needn’t reach across the skies... And also, if by fate, we get the chance to gaze into each other’s eyes... I’ll know for all eternity that you and I have passed this way before... But now, I’ll reach my hand to you, and wait... for you to touch me, just once more... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very very beautiful thoughts ... glad I saw this one  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Rex.... and I thank you so much........glad you enjoyed this one, and good to see you! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Walker.... Ah.......they are so cute!! Thank you for reading, too!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
made me ~~sigh~~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was wonderful...I can't tell you enough how much I enjoyed reading it! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How wonderful to have the sentiments returned. Lovely work, Sunny. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - I have the biggest smile for you, and wish you the best my friend. And by the way, you write good too! BC |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
I held my breath as I read this one! Wonderful. "Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely, Sunny. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Sunnyone, The love story you told was much like my own. This poem has really touched me. Melton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems like there's a whole lot of touching going on....well done little one.... |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Beautiful words. I loved it and had to read it twice. I have a true love and he is my friend, my husband, and my lover...it's nice. Red |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This was a beautiful read to start my day. Thanks. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful.....heartfelt. Gentle and full of hope. All captured in your writing. "One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Just a note to say a very special thank you to: Wynter,sans38,Sandra,Bill,Secret Whisper,Kathleen,2dalimit,Sunshine,Red-uni,JLR, and dreamkeeper........ You don't know how much I appreciate and enjoy your replies. Hearing your thoughts and knowing that maybe I "touched you", is what I live for..... So, I thank you all, my friends...... I love you all, too...... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely poem! *S* I was anxiously awaiting the response right along with you! *S* Well done! |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
WOOOOH! That was like, WOW! This is one of the best I've ever encontered. I feel it! I know it all to well. Thank you for the wonderful write. FANTASTIC! Hugs, Tammy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ And you just touched us all ! *Hugs*, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunny, This is so lovely and up lifting and I too have a smile on my face, wonderful poetry here friend, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
how ya doing sweetie You have a way with words that can leave a reader sighing for more... Great write PoetFriend I'm glad I got the chance to read this one... Hugs2Ualways ~coco~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I had to come back and say if you have to ask if someone loves you....that's not good  Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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