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Pacific Pleasures {Pantoum} revised
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Pacific Pleasures {Pantoum} revised |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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A mirror of blue and aqua hue Glass that expands over endless miles While I sit and enjoy the view Flowers bloom on the verdant isles Glass that expands over endless miles Melodies float upon rainy mists Flowers bloom on the verdant isles Where ocean waves and blue skies kiss Melodies float upon rainy mists Mermaids play and sea nymphs hide Where ocean waves and blue skies kiss I listen to the roaring tide Mermaids play and sea nymphs hide While I sit and enjoy the view I listen to the roaring tide A mirror of blue and aqua hue © 2001 Koko Stewart Koomoa (All rights reserved) Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You paint some wonderful images in this piece and it is refreshing to read one that holds a dream that we could only hope to be real instead of fantasy. Who knows......maybe mermaids do exist. Beautifully written. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
than you Mark!!!  Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful pantoum, I like the imagery. Nicely penned. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I would love to be where you describe right this very minute! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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