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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-03-06 01:22 AM


I have this urge to dance
Just let the music take us away
Would you care to dance lover?
Oh Come on...whatcha say

I think you can really shake 'em down
Let's give it a try
Just let loose and laugh a little
When your having fun time flies by

A little rock and roll
It's enough to make the heart smile
Some jazz and blues
Will take our troubles away for a while

The music will be our inspiration
As we dance together in perfect beat
Okay so I am no awesome dancer
Yes yes...I know in fact I have two left feet

But the music is calling our name
I can feel it in the air
Let's just throw our troubles to the wind
Tonight we don't have a care

Your eyes cast my way
As I see the smile I've come to adore
Together we go back to show 'em what we got
Just you and me out on the dance floor

*i know different for me...just playing around
tonight*




"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
DreamLess
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1 posted 2001-03-06 04:04 AM


you seem to be really in the mood ha!!
but it is lovely


you should always be in this mood


WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-03-06 09:39 AM


I can hear the beat...Amy, thanks for putting a smile on my face this cold, blistery morning!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


suthern
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3 posted 2001-03-06 12:13 PM


It would take a VERY brave soul to dance with my klutzy self. *G* But your invitation to the dance gave me big smiles... bring on the courageous! LOL
snowpants
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4 posted 2001-03-06 01:47 PM


'I have this urge to dance
Just let the music take us away
Would you care to dance lover?
Oh Come on...whatcha say'

'But the music is calling our name
I can feel it in the air
Let's just throw our troubles to the wind
Tonight we don't have a care'

This is sooo cute, Aims...I love it!! So carefree...hmm...looks good on ya, girlie!! Very fun write!!

-e ~~~~~



do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2001-03-06 03:28 PM


I love the nightlife
I love to BOOGIE!

YEAH!

I really enjoyed this Amy
a fun and happy poem

Hugs

Maree


I may know the word, but not say it
I may know the truth, but not face it
I may hear a sound, a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head, indifferent.

Natalie Merchant


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-06-2001).]

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-03-06 04:08 PM


yes a bit different but oh so cool!!
and its so great to see you trying new things
and strectching as a poet
and smiling as my sunshine-girlie should be.
great melody in this Ams!!
me

Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

JLR
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7 posted 2001-03-06 05:14 PM


Yea! A happy one. You did it very well.
JCGF
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MA
8 posted 2001-03-06 07:43 PM


Music is theorapy for me and a dance is a PLUS! Music, people and dancing. Yes, it does make time fly. Nice write. I love it!

Tammy

Marsha
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9 posted 2001-03-07 12:33 PM


Amy darling girl, this is fabulous. You know how much I love this I know, it really has so much life in it. Utterly fabulous writing
well done
Take care love as always
Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2002-01-20 02:09 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) May you forever dance happily with the happiness of true love! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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