Open Poetry #12 |
Wanna Dance? |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I have this urge to dance Just let the music take us away Would you care to dance lover? Oh Come on...whatcha say I think you can really shake 'em down Let's give it a try Just let loose and laugh a little When your having fun time flies by A little rock and roll It's enough to make the heart smile Some jazz and blues Will take our troubles away for a while The music will be our inspiration As we dance together in perfect beat Okay so I am no awesome dancer Yes yes...I know in fact I have two left feet But the music is calling our name I can feel it in the air Let's just throw our troubles to the wind Tonight we don't have a care Your eyes cast my way As I see the smile I've come to adore Together we go back to show 'em what we got Just you and me out on the dance floor *i know different for me...just playing around tonight* "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
you seem to be really in the mood ha!! but it is lovely you should always be in this mood WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I can hear the beat...Amy, thanks for putting a smile on my face this cold, blistery morning! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It would take a VERY brave soul to dance with my klutzy self. *G* But your invitation to the dance gave me big smiles... bring on the courageous! LOL |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I have this urge to dance Just let the music take us away Would you care to dance lover? Oh Come on...whatcha say' 'But the music is calling our name I can feel it in the air Let's just throw our troubles to the wind Tonight we don't have a care' This is sooo cute, Aims...I love it!! So carefree...hmm...looks good on ya, girlie!! Very fun write!! -e ~~~~~ do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love the nightlife I love to BOOGIE! YEAH! I really enjoyed this Amy a fun and happy poem Hugs Maree I may know the word, but not say it I may know the truth, but not face it I may hear a sound, a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head, indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes a bit different but oh so cool!! and its so great to see you trying new things and strectching as a poet and smiling as my sunshine-girlie should be. great melody in this Ams!! me Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Yea! A happy one. You did it very well. |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Music is theorapy for me and a dance is a PLUS! Music, people and dancing. Yes, it does make time fly. Nice write. I love it! Tammy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling girl, this is fabulous. You know how much I love this I know, it really has so much life in it. Utterly fabulous writing well done Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) May you forever dance happily with the happiness of true love! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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