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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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whispered kisses i leave on your pillow like stars fallen from the sky... i'm sorry love i must be leaving-- day breaks and the world begins i do not wish to leave this wrinkled canvas where we've painted our portrait of heaven... as quietly you breathe honeysuckle sighs... whispered kisses i leave on your pillow-- on your cheek on your brow your lips your skin... like sighs falling... from... the day will wait... -dgvarner 1-16-01< !signature--> "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Yes, the day will wait.  Always time for those whispered kisses. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Did you post this before or somewhere else? It sounds and physically looks so familiar. I really like it, it has an intriguing look and feel to it. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MAR..yes, and time for dreams...  VAS..thank you for reading no..i havent posted this poem anywhere before..just wrote it last nite in response to a reply from a certain canadian to my poem 'MESMERIZED'  ..(this is a bit like that one..? or possibly similar to one called 'confetti wishes'..? maybe all mine sound the same...lol)hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee love, this is utterly superb, you have achieved a higher lovel love. Trust me I have taste, ask Kari, she'll tell you. (She'll say it's not to be relied on, but it is! Honestly) This is truly wonderful love absolutely excellant, like my taste, utterly excellant. Take care love Bubbles This is truly one of your best. And your poems don't all sound the same love. They are only alike in that they are all magnificent be good but not too ........Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I sure wish the day could wait around here........beautifully done! -SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, what more could one ask for... the day does wait.... but I look for those whispers at nite. Parker |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
And I dearly love the ending, or is it really the beginning?  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Exquisite ! 'i do not wish to leave this wrinkled canvas where we've painted our portrait of heaven...' Oh, yes ... it is just that way. It just slinked right down the page ... Lovely, lady. And 'fiddle-dee-dee' ... your thoughts are uniquely you each and every time you write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes....I love those whispered kisses... excellent penned as always ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge has already quoted that exqusite verse. What a great image you portray in this poem You are truly talented Liz |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
BUBBLES..well my friend, you always make me smile by saying such sweet things! thanks much as always SEA..just ..well..every now and then...call in late!  PARKER..picture--early morn before the sun rises love.. would that be ok with you? if not..we could reschedule for night...  SUNNY..exactly.... MARGE..'exquisite'..wow love your reply.. and thanks for 'fiddle dee dee' too.....!CHARISMA..i thank you so much friend poet ELIZABETH..thank you! so glad you stopped in to read me  you guys are so cool! thanks a bunch!! hugs, g |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yeppers..........the darn day can wait. Wonderful piece from you. I truely liked the style you used also. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Yes, that will do nicely. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
COWBOY MARK..glad you enjoyed the dream good to hear from you PARKER..thought you might reconsider... hugs cowboys.. g |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooooooo beautiful and tender! (kiss on cheek) May he forever touch your heart with kisses, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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