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Magic Margie Girls' Moon (It is a shape, but only because of Margie girl) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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The only reason this is in any shape at all except wonky is the super human effort Margie girl has in making it (un wonky) look like a round moon. I had some crazy idea that I could try a crescent, but I couldn't. Thank you Margie girl this is your moon. Magic Margie Girls' Moon  The cresting moon is so very clear Sends back heart tears Those soft stars, my friend Will all of my sorrows amend There in cool of moon's gleam Troubles fade and are unseen This my moon of Margie girl Causes all heads to swirl Crescent moon plays ~*~Sliver tune~*~ ~*~ Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-07-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~This is~ so very nice, Marsha, I for one am partial to the moon it's glow and pattern poetry *S* ~Wynter /Child of the ~Moon~ "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Showoffs.... 'tis wonderful! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling with deligh* this is wonderful. Both in shape and content. I loved it. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Glowing  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no doubt. . . I'm with Sunshine. . . showoffs. . . LOL. . .  I love it Marsha. . . it's wonderful. . . and maybe next time the crescent??  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How creative Marsha! I really like the last two lines.Marge will love this! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you and margie made moondust magic lovley imagery and presentation Marsha.. well done. take care jm Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marsha...you just SHINE girl... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Mushy! you're getting so much more creative all the time....just love ya and your attitude so much...write'em up girl! ethome Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ ~*~ Marsha ~*~ with glow of the moon you do shine as brightly as the stars that twinkle nightly Catching all of us with surprise Seeing the beauty through your sweet poet eyes ~*~ ~*~ That little 'Wonky' moon that didn't want to crescent left me instead with a lovely present ~*~ *MarshaGirl ... you just bubble with enthusiasm and love. Big *Hugs* back at ya', gal ! I love the word 'WONKY' ! And I love you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
Wow, beautiful images and a beautiful display! Gorgeous poetry, I really enjoyed the read!  "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi everyone, Wynter, Kari dear heart, Karen, hoot, Sven dear heart, Melissa, Janet Marie, Paula dear heart, P T love, Margie dear one, and Sunlit Soul, Individually I thank yu from the bottom of my bottomless heart. Collectively I send you all my love, and thanks. You know that I so rarely go for a group reply, but this week has been one of exceptional pace and volume. I'll blame the weather, it is deadly out there this week. For the shape, I thank Margie girl, everyone knows that I could never have completed it without her. For the words I must thank Kari, who drops a few of the ones she doesn't need into my begging bowl. Thank you all for taking the time to read and I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Love as always take care Mushy Bubbles Puck Have i left any names out? Possibly I do have so many, but whatever name I go under know that I am always me! And this me loves you x |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is sooooooo gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) May the moon of beauty forever shine in your heart, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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