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Inner Reflections |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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My inner reflections feel your whisper, your wings of thought & simple poems speak of love and desire, but there is no simplicity where angels tread and eagles soar & moments of time are gazed upon in love and faith of the heart, my heart but a single thread waiting for you to weave together the colors of us like the light from the sun or the moon gathering it's flame from the same strength We freely flow from the same stream blending waters into the vast sea, yet I feel as lonely as the pelican perched upon a hardened wood piling driven deeper in drowning waters caught by the under toes of life teach me your life, show me how it feels, show me how it feels in the shadows of loss you pull me in and I begin to see, I become what others see me as, and still you touch me like no other, but there are times I need a defense against my heart expressed silently as my world takes shape where underneath the wheels of passion you leave me stranded as you have before yet still you touch me *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I like the feel of that last line especially, especially after all that has gone before. a touching way to end the piece. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved the feeling and oh, I don't know if there is any defense against a heart! Loved this very much Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my heart but a single thread waiting for you to weave together the colors of us like the light from the sun or the moon gathering it's flame from the same strength ================== such beauty in words... and so many times you write my heart in your verse... beautiful reflections GE .... written in your trademark soft spoken way take care gentle poet jm Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
VAS~ there are memories and people in life that touch us all....I do appreciate you coming in to visit one of mine....  Be well my friendKathleen~ you are correct, there is no """good""" defense against the heart, thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this.... be wellJanet Marie~ the many verses of life, some we keep as memoreis, some we may want to toss, but ohhh those few rare and precious ones.....we hold close....thank you always for your support, and for understanding you to be well poet friend..... ~  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know that feeling. . . of being pulled in when you know that you shouldn't. . . but can we ignore it??? excellent words. . . simply beautiful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Greeneyes- Can relate very much to these words...wonderful write. Poeminister "There is no remedy for love but to love more." --Henry David Thoreau |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - this is beautiful, all the words that you write. I too, feel the touch. BC |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you write words that can touch - as no others I know can - |
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