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I Turned Around
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I Turned Around saw you smile then you laughed silver echoed in the air you didn’t see that wisp of me golden in the light but I turned around at the sound enchanted knowing you will do well without my presence and still spread silver in the air |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwwww beautiful words... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you Wynter. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
saw you smile then you laughed silver echoed in the air you didn’t see that wisp of me golden in the light ================= and still spread silver in the air =============== succinct and most successful!! clever and unique images "silver echoed in the air" very cool line there Lady. well done poetess  It's amazing how you make your face just like a wall how you take your heart and turn it off how I turn my head and lose it all MB20 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great images here... I like this a lot! *S* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you, Janet Marie and Suthern...so very glad you could take a moment to enjoy this with me... |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Great lines. Well done, unique, I liked it very much  . Red |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
oops, doing two replies. I wanted to save this to my library and forgot to check the box. hehehe, Still love it. Red |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I loved this. Could see these thoughts come out of several different types of relationships. Beautiful, Lady. "One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
'knowing you will do well without my presence'...how sweetly sad. I like this very much. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
liked this to my library. Bernie Bernie Slicker (aka also: justsomeofme) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lady love, this is truly absolutely delightful, you are fast becoming one of my favourite writers here. I love this you have a wonderful way with words, you make them sing songs in my soul.Fabulous work dear heart Take care love as always Puck Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Unique and subtle imagery..very nicely penned. Poeminister |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Reduni, thank you for giving me sanctum in your library... yes, dreamkeeper, exactly, thank you... JLR, I like that line, too, thank you... Bernie, thank you... Marsha, so many poets to choose from, thank you... Poeminister, thank you Sir... |
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