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The Irony Of Love and Loss
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The Irony Of Love and Loss |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
The Irony of Love and Loss Held in the clutches of abandon her spirit struggles for liberation a yearning burns deep inside set by the flame which burns around the soul of a lost love the gnawing ache, given life within her heart at his renouncement, swells to immense confines her body, once flooded with passion, now bears a steel cold deficiency… the flow of desire through her veins having been embalmed by his glacial hand such irony--feelings of helplessness in finding his love--and then in it’s loss the being lost in his kiss—and lost by his abandon swept away to a place she’s never been before soaring to new heights—falling to endless depths so much is the irony of her yearning… a yearning for his touch as equally strong-- as the yearning for freedom from the clutches of abandon…. Annie Lehberg achildsheart 03-05-01 May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow... quote: well done... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is so true....very well said  SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to agree with Karilea this is a wonderful work and the title sets it up so well... that yearning heart keeping the author in an abyss of abandonment and from there seeking the same desire that got her there in the first place... so ambivalent this thinking...well written Annie!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Sunshine, thank you so much, I really appreciate the wonderful response. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Sea, I am thrilled you enjoyed this piece . thank you for reading. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Ethome, I am honored by your response. thank you. |
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