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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-01-09 10:01 PM




Come, my love, and fly with me,
we’ll drift on winter’s wind…
Feel  our feathers ruffle in the air…
High above the human race, our journey shall begin…
Taking  us to places far from care…


Within the clouds, our eagle eyes can see what lies ahead…
The sun shines full beyond earth’s darkened sky…
On wings of stealth, and side by side,
we’ll make our way instead…
Into the rainbow beckoning you and I…


Beyond the rainbow, there awaits a land of evermore…
So often sought within the human mind…
A magic place of freedom,
chains will bind us nevermore…
It’s promised those who seek will surely find…


So. come my love, and fly with me…
Enchanted nights we’ll spend,
drifting through the sparkling diamond sky…
When morning comes, we’ll soar on eagle’s wings
into the wind…
Together, and Forever…we shall fly…




Write on!
-<--<--{(@


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-09 10:05 PM


Sunny1...how you write!  This is wonderful!
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-01-09 10:07 PM


Lovely poem...beautifully written...

Poeminister

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2001-01-09 10:10 PM


~~~ Sunshine ~~~
I'm glad that you enjoyed this at the same time I was enjoying the Corner Pub!!  

~~~ Poeminister ~~~
Thank you so much....I do appreciate your reading this little poem of mine!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


CocoBaci
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4 posted 2001-01-10 12:37 PM


SUNNY1, this is awesome and the graphic added to this poem just captivated this reader...

My eyes kept drifting back and forth as I read each verse softly I really enjoyed this poem it was kinda like whispers in a breeze of warm summer air...

Thank you PoetFriend for the enjoyable read
Hugs2Ualways


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Sunnyone
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5 posted 2001-01-10 12:42 PM


~~~ Coco ~~~
Many thanks to you, my friend, for enjoying this work of mine.......I was hoping that it would make the reader feel like they were floating on the wind!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-01-10 01:16 PM


Nice thoughts, Sunny, I wish flying so free was possible. Beautifully written.
S

Honeybee
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7 posted 2001-01-19 04:43 PM



A beautiful flow and tale of love!

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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8 posted 2003-01-27 12:10 PM


let me get my wings! I'm there!
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