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“Into the Wind”
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“Into the Wind” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Come, my love, and fly with me, we’ll drift on winter’s wind… Feel our feathers ruffle in the air… High above the human race, our journey shall begin… Taking us to places far from care… Within the clouds, our eagle eyes can see what lies ahead… The sun shines full beyond earth’s darkened sky… On wings of stealth, and side by side, we’ll make our way instead… Into the rainbow beckoning you and I… Beyond the rainbow, there awaits a land of evermore… So often sought within the human mind… A magic place of freedom, chains will bind us nevermore… It’s promised those who seek will surely find… So. come my love, and fly with me… Enchanted nights we’ll spend, drifting through the sparkling diamond sky… When morning comes, we’ll soar on eagle’s wings into the wind… Together, and Forever…we shall fly… Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1...how you write! This is wonderful! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely poem...beautifully written... Poeminister |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sunshine ~~~ I'm glad that you enjoyed this at the same time I was enjoying the Corner Pub!!  ~~~ Poeminister ~~~ Thank you so much....I do appreciate your reading this little poem of mine!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SUNNY1, this is awesome and the graphic added to this poem just captivated this reader... My eyes kept drifting back and forth as I read each verse softly I really enjoyed this poem it was kinda like whispers in a breeze of warm summer air... Thank you PoetFriend for the enjoyable read Hugs2Ualways [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Coco ~~~ Many thanks to you, my friend, for enjoying this work of mine.......I was hoping that it would make the reader feel like they were floating on the wind!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice thoughts, Sunny, I wish flying so free was possible. Beautifully written. S |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful flow and tale of love! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
let me get my wings! I'm there! |
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