Open Poetry #12 |
How do you silence a screaming heart |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
How do you silence a screaming heart I wear a crimson scar embroidered every place you touched no place on me not bleeding covered now in lovers blood I run to hide in darkness mask myself from any light but it seems that I am frozen fettered in emotional cuts injuries yet fresh, some healed exposed alone I stand searching and left to wonder how do you silence a screaming heart |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
only time or love can heal a screaming heart. take care ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wish I knew the answer to that...but don't try my way...but this is so much like me...makes me wonder if you're okay? LOL and I know, I know, I know...HUG of the Day for you! |
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Frankie Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 57 |
I wish I knew for I would surely give it my all.....sometimes it seems that even time will not silence all of the madness inside that a departed lover has left us with. Enjoyed this one....can relate totally. Frankie |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
You've taken the most important step by sharing true feelings. Intensity of pain was vividly described in your writing. Rae |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
You've taken the most important step by sharing true feelings. Intensity of pain was vividly described in your writing. Rae |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Nice Slick wonderful poem Rich |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thank you all........sometimes a poem hurts to write .........it leaves you so naked |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
when you figure out the answer.....let me know. |
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