Open Poetry #12 |
Old Friends............... (5000) |
SEA
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Rainy day today……. Radio down low…….then that song comes on You know it, the one that triggers your heart Puts it racing in reverse Back to times with old friends Younger days………….crazy days Not a care in the world……except for what we'd be doing And who'd be there Innocence at the verge of enlightenment So you turn it up………..loud And for the length of the song ………….You're gone………. And as reality seeps back in The smile stays on your lips And the tear that slips quietly down your cheek Gets carefully brushed away. ~SEA~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
SEA Northern California Member Ascendant since 01-18-2000 Posts 5000 frame it yuh... i love the playin a tune idea...really good 5000th |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
congrats on the 5000th! well written poem, enjoyed it! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ya, sweet memories . . . Congrats, SEA!!! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Walt~ thank you yuh...... NC~ thanks for reading this Krawdad~ thank you ~SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that radio's playing one of my favorites. . . 500 Miles. . . or in this case. . . 5,000 posts!!!! Congrats SEA. . . you've done wonderfully with this one. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You took me back...wonderful Sea...congrats on 5000...looking forward to 5000 more |
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the romantic fanatic Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 26Spokane, WA U.S.A. |
Very nice, indeed. I've got a little catching up to do if I am to read all yours...but I'm sure it'll be worth it! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Sven~ I know that song......from Benny and June.....I have the soundtrack Paula~ thank you very much! RF~ well, there aren't too many............thanks for reading this one ~ SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sea a great big CONGRATS! I have read your kind comments and wonderful poetry as much as I've been able and it's been a pleasure.....This one reminds me of the Trisha Yearwood song..."The Song Remembers When' The words you have penned here are so true and I wish you the best with so many many more!! ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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SEA
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Ethome~ thank you, that's so sweet of you Yes, I know that song.....it makes me cry every time....... love it.....again, thank you so much SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Innocence at the verge of enlightenment So you turn it up………..loud And for the length of the song ………….You're gone………. And as reality seeps back in The smile stays on your lips And the tear that slips quietly down your cheek Gets carefully brushed away. ================= PERFECT!!!! Congrats on oyur milestone post my sweet Sea-gator... thank you SO much for the MANY wonderful replies to my work and for the treasured gift of poems you have shared with me that make up some of the 5000!!! I love this sincere well expressed poem of memories held dear.. great write me girlie Way cool.. you are love ya jm ********** Beautiful friends ... fantastic times... warm weather... mellow songs ... poetic rhymes. Remembering the times we laughed ... the times I've cried ... we all loved each other ... without even having tried. Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, truly this is a momentous occassion, a wonderful poem and a celebration of your 5000 Well done love this is truly outstanding. Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Janet~ You are the best.... thank you.....you inspire me........and incourage me, thank you for that.....hugs Marsha~ thank you sweet friend, it means a lot to me ~SEA ( Circe) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read,my friend |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
CONGRATS!!!!!!!! on your 5000th post and for making so many of them to me. You celebrate this wonderful piece with us in a style that is unmistakeably yours and of course it is a beautiful piece to celebrate with anyway. I look forward to watching you achieve your next milestone with the same flair that brought you to this one. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Vandana~ thank you sweetie Mark~ yes, lots to you, dear poet friend thank you for all of yours too! thank you for always having something wonderful and sweet to say.........it means so much.... ~SEA |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
big hugs to you on 5000 WOW....lovely SEA... *** Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
sea- i swore i responded to this earlier... i must be losing my mind lol. anyway excellent write! really loved this. im a huge fan of music too...and they can bring back memories in a flash for us cant they?! you have captured this here so wondefully...congrats on 5000 posts hon. you make passions part of the magical place that it is! take care amy ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...you know I wouldn't miss the opportunity to thank you for all of your posts and replies! Sorry I'm a day late... but somehow I know you understand! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Greeneyes....Amy.....and Sunshine thank you for your nice replies Sunshine, I know, and thank you so much for that! SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Not a care in the world……except for what we'd be doing And who'd be there Innocence at the verge of enlightenment' Congrats on 5,000, SEA!! Wonderful job, and wonderful post with which to celebrate!! I love this one, and can definitely relate!! sp do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely memories playin on the radio, ...beautiful write, and Congrats on 5000!! Poeminister |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, Well done my friend. Fitting one for a milestone. Congrats on your 5000th!!!! Here is to 5000 more!!!!!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
congratulations....and yes, memories are the tunes of yesterday...thank you for sharing such wonderful words, SEA ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Congratulations... and you celebrated your milestone with a gem. *S* There are some songs that instantly transport us back across the years... Well done! *S* |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--Congratulaions on that 5000...I have enjoyed your poetry so much...and thank you for your thoughtful responses. Enjoyed this trip into your radio. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How did you know? I didn't think anyone saw :-) Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sea, "Oh" I love those times when time stands still and memories take over, wonderful thoughts in this one enjoyed much and congrats on 5000, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sea... I wish I had more time these days to catch-up on the gems you've been posting, but I want you to know when things do settle down here, I'll be digging those backpages and sending you my smiles as your poetry ALWAYS brings a smile to my face and for this DearFriend I gotta say thank you because I sure do appreciate reading your sweet poems And by the way, Muaah on cheeks for reaching 5000th, that is fabulous, as I'm aware how much you dedicate yourself to reading and replying to many PoetFriends poems Hugs2Ualways ~coco~ |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Hmmm... music and dance that evokes teary eyed emotion....this I am certainly not a stranger of...I am strangely touched by this Congrats on the 5000 posts... (thats alot!) :-) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Sorry I missed your 5000th post. 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Yes there are 5000 here,specially for you. Daniel Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so very much...DJD you know you rock.......... SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like your number 5000 Sea....James |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most timely bump - a month later, and you're half-way to 6000..... |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
I am impressed, 5000 poems!!! And your poems are so very good. I enjoy readin your post. Red |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sea....Super! Bob |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Congrats on 5000!!! Wonderful poem.. very beautiful! Thanks for sharing... --Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Cogratulations ~SEA~ I love to nice poetry. |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Hi SEA, Congratulations on your 5000th post, and a poem that I can relate to too! The power of music to arouse long lost memories - GREAT. Cheers Jon |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (sigh) I don't know why, but sometimes I hear old songs on the radio that came out before I was born, and I get nostalgia then too! (giggles) This is soooooo wonderful, sweet friend, you know what they say...make new friends, keep the old, one is silver, the other gold!" (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible! |
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